Comments on: IELTS Essay on Sports – Full Essay & Scoring

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Sun, 17 Aug 2025 12:07:14 +0000

In reply to Farhang Hooshmand. Thank you for sending your IELTS essay on sport to us. As frequently mentioned earlier, one essay topic can only one one essay model.

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Mon, 01 Aug 2022 10:37:46 +0000

In reply to Armaghan. In your conclusion, you should either rephrase or summarize the points you mentioned in your essay. You are welcome to repeat the keywords as well. Moreover, you should not give new information not mentioned in your essay.

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Mon, 01 Aug 2022 10:34:34 +0000

In reply to Armaghan. Reflect on / upon is a phrasal verb which means to think deeply on something, ponder, consider, dwell on, etc. Reflect = be a sign of something, suggest, indicate, etc.

By: Armaghan

Armaghan — Sun, 31 Jul 2022 13:37:45 +0000

I have another question, as you mentioned, I do not know how to write a good and standard conclusion. Would you please help me with that?

By: Armaghan

Armaghan — Sun, 31 Jul 2022 13:35:01 +0000

Hello Dr.Hariri.
I have a question in my essay’s analysis.
in this part: (It also reflects on children’s mental health and self-confidence), you had marked (reflects on), so that means the verb reflect doesn’t need proposition ( on) ?

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Fri, 29 Jul 2022 08:42:15 +0000

In reply to Armaghan.

Dear Dr. Hooshmand,
With all due respect, I should say that you do not pay attention to this point that each topic should have only one essay. I’m quoting myself:
” As you already know, each topic should have only one essay no longer than 300 words.”
I can create a fresh new topic per week for you, and only one fresh essay is allowed for the corresponding topic. The second, third, etc. will not be assessed.

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Fri, 29 Jul 2022 08:38:11 +0000

In reply to Farhang Hooshmand. Thanks for mentioning the allocated time.

By: Farhang Hooshmand

Farhang Hooshmand — Fri, 29 Jul 2022 06:57:41 +0000

40 min

By: Farhang Hooshmand

Farhang Hooshmand — Fri, 29 Jul 2022 06:56:54 +0000

School children do not seem to spend adequate time doing physical exercise to prevent overweightness and obesity.
This is one of the main solicitudes of parents and education officials. The problem became even worse after COVID 19 pandemic. Most of children and even adults had to remain home and had no choice other than being a coach potato. This kind of sedentary life with consuming too much junk food added salt to injury. Even after receding the outbreak and opening the schools the problem continues. Several reasons could be mentioned. One of the main problems is lack of enough physical activity. Children usually have a sweat tooth and have a tendency to eat fast foods. Most of them spend hours in front of TV or computer games without spending a calorie.
So to deal with this problem the best way is to persuade them to be more physically active. Sport in school and at weekends is a good policy to manage it. The other solution to tackle this issue is encouraging them to eat less junk food. Another thing that help reducing the problem is school trips for children. Taking them to nature under supervision of school officials both help them to be more active and being with their classmate also develop their social skills.

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Wed, 27 Jul 2022 14:11:58 +0000

In reply to Armaghan. Thanks for submitting your essay. It will be analyzed thoroughly by your next class.