Comments on: IELTS Writing Task 2 | Street Vendors

By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl — Tue, 26 Nov 2024 05:24:36 +0000

In reply to karim. You're so welcome, dear Karim!

By: karim

karim — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 18:26:49 +0000

In reply to Sasan. hi sasan. Thank you for your corrections

By: Dr. Hariri

Dr. Hariri — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 17:00:46 +0000

In reply to Sasan. Good points, thank you! The first two of them were already made by Arash, though.

By: Sasan

Sasan — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 16:53:09 +0000

paragraph two line 1-> The majority of
paragraph two line 2-> they can be survive !! –> they can survive
paragraph two line 3-> they don’t have any insurance
last paragraph –> the above-mentioned problems OR the aforementioned problems

By: Dr. Hariri

Dr. Hariri — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 15:58:38 +0000

In reply to Arash. You're quite welcome.

By: Arash

Arash — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 15:49:59 +0000

In reply to karim. Hello, Karim. You are welcome.

By: Arash

Arash — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 15:49:18 +0000

In reply to Dr. Hariri. Hello. Thank you so much.

By: karim

karim — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 14:50:35 +0000

In reply to Arash. Hello arash. Thank you for your corrections

By: Dr. Hariri

Dr. Hariri — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 13:30:49 +0000

In reply to Arash. ? I do admire your concerted effort to perform peer-assessment. As you know, teaching is the best way to learn something.

By: Arash

Arash — Wed, 27 Sep 2017 10:55:57 +0000

Hello,
Thank you so much, Mr. Karim,
In paragraph 1 line 1: in domestic economy ➡ in the domestic economy, selling variety ➡ selling a variety, line 2: with a high-level quality to a low level.
In paragraph 2 line 1: majority of people have tendency ➡ the majority of people have a tendency (you need to use an article), from them therefore ➡ from them, therefore.
In paragraph 2 line 2: can be survive ➡ can survive, of economy ➡ of (an/the) economy, problems about ➡ problems with
In paragraph 2 line 3: by government ➡ by the government
In paragraph 2 line 4: reason in ➡ reason for, in economy ➡ in the economy.
In paragraph 3 line 1: I think, ➡ I think