Comments on: IELTS Writing Task 1 on Online Sales with Assessment https://lelb.net/ielts-writing-task-1-on-online-sales/ A Bilingual Academy of English & Persian Thu, 21 Aug 2025 07:47:39 +0000 hourly 1 By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl https://lelb.net/ielts-writing-task-1-on-online-sales/#comment-11794 Mon, 21 Aug 2023 10:05:49 +0000 https://lelb.net/?p=119909#comment-11794 In reply to Armaghan Houshmand.

Thank you for submitting your IELTS reports to us for assessment.

]]> By: Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl https://lelb.net/ielts-writing-task-1-on-online-sales/#comment-11793 Mon, 21 Aug 2023 10:05:23 +0000 https://lelb.net/?p=119909#comment-11793 In reply to Armaghan Houshmand.

Thanks for mentioning the time you spent on this IELTS report.

]]> By: Armaghan Houshmand https://lelb.net/ielts-writing-task-1-on-online-sales/#comment-11792 Mon, 21 Aug 2023 08:34:02 +0000 https://lelb.net/?p=119909#comment-11792 the time spent on writing: 20 minutes

]]> By: Armaghan Houshmand https://lelb.net/ielts-writing-task-1-on-online-sales/#comment-11791 Mon, 21 Aug 2023 08:33:38 +0000 https://lelb.net/?p=119909#comment-11791 This bar graph shows the number of smartphones, laptops, and tablets sold online in the first quarter of 2019 in million units.
The bar graph indicates that in January 2019 the sales of laptops were the most by nearly 50 million units. And the least were smartphones with almost 20 million units. The following month, however, the tablet’s sales remarkably increased to almost 65 million sold-outs. Which was even more than what laptops and smartphones sold. Moreover, the sales of laptops decreased to 30 million units.
In March the sale of smartphones had a notable and surprising increase. It sold more than 70 million units. The sale of laptops had a gradual diminishment to 20 million units. In contrast, the sales of smartphones stayed the same as in February. In April, only around 40 million smartphones were sold, which indicates a remarkable decreasement. Furthermore, compared to previous months, the sales of laptops had a considerable increase and reached almost 50 million units. And tablets had a notable decrease with only about 30 million units.

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