English Storytelling on Vain Crow with Correction

English Storytelling on Vain Crow

English Storytelling on

English Storytelling on Vain Crow with Correction

Story English Fairy Tales

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Story Told by LELB Society’s Student:

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  • flying on the sky ➡ flying in the sky

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  • He was attracted by the peacocks ➡ he was attracted to the peacocks
  • Eyebrow: /ˈaɪ.braʊ/
  • Mouth: bill or beak

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  • One idea occurred him ➡ one idea just occurred to him

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  • When his friends leave him ➡ … when his friends left him

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  • He was surprised of what they said ➡ he was surprised at / by what they said

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