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, Adolescence, or (which one is more favored by you?)

Essayist: Sam

 

It is noteworthy that puberty brings about major changes in adolescence life including independence and expansion of friend’s circle. Firstly, pubertal changes have greatest impacts on adolescent lives where both physical and spiritual developments take shape. Some hormones can change moods into a unique state which one has never experienced before. Furthermore, Self-governing is another lovable feeling that presents adolescence a real sense of freedom regarding mental, financial, etc. perspective, which is per say remarkable. Being independent from the parental monitoring gives the adolescence freedom to take any approaches they want to do in their own lives in order to experience enormous activities whether mentally based or emotionally. In addition, inside the circle of friends, the adolescent can boost their self-esteem and other personality traits. To be more precise, healthy puberty and appropriate independence lead them to having nice companionship with each other easily for their future life by precious hormones; have incredible level during their life time. Thus, the adolescent period is a priceless present, within which they should take pleasure in the benefits of the time utterly.

Essayist: Sasan

From my vantage point, myriads of points could endorse the fact that adulthood is the most astounding part of anyone’s life, including independence, having a position in the society, and being mature. First and foremost, adults have enough autonomy to act on their initiative rather than implementing others’ instructions, and this sense of freedom brings enormous enjoyment in life. Apart from that, a grown person could reach a good position in the society and find a fulfilling job with a handsome salary. To put it in another way, they could be somebody in the society, and it leads to boosting their egos and confidence. Last but not least, on average, the older one gets, the more mature one becomes. Because with the passage of time, a plethora of experiences could be gained. As a result, they could master the art of making friends with gentle people from all walks of life and expand their circle of friends, and this leads to uplifting the quality of life. Consequently, adulthood is an astonishing period of life, and its pleasure ought not to be overlooked.

Essayist: Taraneh

There have been hundreds of times in our life that we wished to go back to our childhood period again because it is the happiest time of a person’s life. There are so many reasons for that, but in my point of view, low responsibility, making friends and free of mind are the most important of all. First, children live without any responsibility; no one expects them to do anything like making money or taking care of anything. Even nobody asks them to wash the dishes. They are free to play all day long and enjoy every moments of that. My second reason is that their minds are free; as a matter of fact, they can simply learn everything around them by just one time hearing and repeating it. My last reason is that they can simply make friends, no matter what gender their friends are such as girls or boys; furthermore, there isn’t any hatred in their world for any nationality or any religion. As a result of these aspects of the childhood period, they simply become friends to each other and share their toys to play with. So I think the most joyful time of anyone’s life is his or her childhood.

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