IELTS Writing Task 1 | Export Performance

IELTS Writing Task 1 | Export Performance

IELTS Writing Task 1 | Export Performance

?Instructions:

The chart below gives some information about Someland’s main export performances in 2005, 2015, and its future prospect in 2025.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information delineated in the graph.

Essayist: Arash

The bar chart below shows some information about Someland’s main export performances in 2005, 2015, and its future prospect in 2025.

There is a slight decline in meat products between these years from four billion dollars to approximately three billion dollars. On the other hand, there is a considerable increase in international tourism from about six billion dollars in 2005 to around eight billion dollars in 2025 which we can come to a conclusion that international tourism has a bright future based on these statistics. In addition, we can see clearly that there is a significant fluctuation in dairy products in these years. There is a noticeable increase from 2005 to 2015. However, there has been a downward trend after this period of time.

To conclude, we can realize that Someland should invest more in international tourism because its future is clear and it will increase Someland’s profits. They can also change their strategies for meat and dairy products in order to get more profits.

✅ Examiner’s Notes:

• Paragraph 2:
  • Line 2: come to this conclusion that
  • Line 3: … international tourism must have a …
  • Line 3: It’s better to say: there is significant fluctuation in
• Chart Analysis:
  • You have improved a lot.
  • You could also say: Unlike meat products, the rate of international tourism has undergone an upward trend.
  • More concerted efforts must be made to improve the rate of meat products in Someland.
• Choice of Words (Diction): Good
• Coherence: Good
• Cohesion: Great
• Grammar: Good
• Reasoning: Great
• Word Count: “164” Great