Watching Television | An IELTS Essay Sample
Do you agree or disagree?
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✅ Error Correction:
- Line 1: brutality and violence “are” being shown
- Line 2: on the one hand
- Line 6: put a damper on violence
- I found your essay rather irrelevant. The independent variable is TV and not violence in the society. The latter is supposed to be an offshoot of TV programs, and not the other way around.