IELTS Writing Task 2 LELB Society

Watching Television | An IELTS Essay Sample

| An IELTS Essay Sample

Watching Television | An IELTS Essay Sample

? Topic:

These days, we are seeing , and this is having a on children’s behavior.

Do you agree or disagree?

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? The Essay Written by LELB Students

These days, and violence is being shown and consequently, children are influenced negatively. To specify it, these days the world is really . On one hand, some groups are competing with each other and it causes stress and also in some parts of the globe nations are fighting against each other. As a result, journalists, film producers etc. try to describe the situation by their products. However, it is not fair to film makers and newspapermen and the problem should be addressed deeply. In fact, in all over the world should try to pacify the globe and put a damper on the violence and . , the world would be and calm and television programs never would go through frustrating subjects.

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✅ Error Correction:

  • Line 1: brutality and violence “are” being shown
  • Line 2: on the one hand
  • Line 6: put a damper on violence
  • I found your essay rather irrelevant. The independent variable is TV and not violence in the society. The latter is supposed to be an offshoot of TV programs, and not the other way around.

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