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IELTS Task 1 Table about Age & Average Income in 3 States

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IELTS Task 1 table about age and average income of people living in three states of The United States of America. This IELTS report has been sent to us for analysis by one of LELB Society members or students.

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The table above displays information about age, average income per person, and population below poverty line in three states of the USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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IELTS Task 1 Table on age & income of people

This table displays the ages (under 18 and over 60), the average income of citizens, and the population below the poverty line in three states of the United States of America (California, Utah, and Florida).

The state of Utah has the highest percentage of residents under 18 years old (28%). Moreover, Utal has the lowest percentage of people over 60 (8%). As a result, this state has the youngest population among these specified states. Florida has the oldest population of all with 23% of citizens over 60 years old. Furthermore, Florida has the lowest percentage of residents under 18 years old (16%). The ages of people over 60 and under 18 in California are somehow close.

  1. under the age of 18
  2. On the contrary / In contrast, Florida … (to show contrast)
  3. over the age of 60
  4. under the age of 18
  5. The percentages of people under 18 and over 60 are comparatively close.

California has the highest average income with 23000 $ per person and then Florida with 22000 $ per person and the lowest is Utal with only 17000 $ per person. Although Utah residents have the lowest income, the percentage of the population below the poverty line is the lowest (9%) and California has the poorest citizens with 16% of the population under the poverty line and Florida is in the middle position with 12% of the population below the poverty line.

  1. You could say, e.g. Florida holds the second rank with roughly 1,000$ lower than Californians.
  2. The first sentence of the paragraph is composed of 3 sentences connected with and.
  3. Such a good comparison about Utah in green.
  4. The last sentence of the paragraph is too long and complicated.

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  • Analysis
    • It’s better to write shorter and simpler sentences.
  • Cohesion and coherence: 18  of 25%
  • Grammatical range and accuracy: 20 of 25%
  • Lexical resources: 17 of 25%
  • Task achievement: 22 of 25%
  • Spelling: Great
  • Punctuation: Good
  • Word Count: “197 Words” – Excellent
  • Time on Report Writing: “20 Minutes” – Great
  • Band score: 7.5 of 9

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  1. This table displays the ages (under 18 and over 60), the average income of citizens, and the population below the poverty line in three states of the United States of America (California, Utah, and Florida).
    The state of Utah has the highest percentage of residents under 18 years old (28%). Moreover, Utal has the lowest percentage of people over 60 (8%). As a result, this state has the youngest population among these specified states. Florida has the oldest population of all with 23% of citizens over 60 years old. Furthermore, Florida has the lowest percentage of residents under 18 years old (16%). The ages of people over 60 and under 18 in California are somehow close.
    California has the highest average income with 23000 $ per person and then Florida with 22000 $ per person and the lowest is Utal with only 17000 $ per person. Although Utah residents have the lowest income, the percentage of the population below the poverty line is the lowest (9%) and California has the poorest citizens with 16% of the population under the poverty line and Florida is in the middle position with 12% of the population below the poverty line.

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