IELTS – TOEFL Preparation Course | Session 15
Topic
Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education is the sign of improvement of every country. By education specially academic education, people can gain a specific skill and lots of knowledge to achieve the specialty required in their jobs. The widespread university graduates in a society can upgrade the scientific level of that society which can bring lots of facilities and welfare for people. To put it in nut shell, education and being skilled and adroit in jobs have mutual effects on each other so that there is no substitution for them.
Delivering a great speech.
1- How can you become a better lecturer?
2- To what extent do you agree that you can improve your skills to giving a lecture with practice?
3- How can you control your stress when you are giving a lecture?
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Nowadays, university education is a must for everyone. Some believe such education is beneficial just for job-hunting. However, other people maintain education is so useful not only for finding a job but also for individuals and society. I personally concur with the latter idea.
On one hand, university education could broaden students’ horizons and their knowledge would be increased undoubtedly. In turn, they can get better jobs owing to their knowledge.
On the other hand, others believe finding a good job is not the only benefit of education. They suppose education could open lots of doors in peoples’ lives. To be more specific, people could fortify their skills which come in handy even in personal life. For instance, education could lead to better decision-making skills and this ability could help people in their lives considerably. I do believe in multifarious positive points of education.
To sum up, university education has a myriad of advantages from finding a satisfying job to personal skills which could help people in their lives.
Line 4: On the one hand
Line 5: Better to say: their knowledge would increase (transitive and intransitive)
Line 7: open doors to one’s lives
Line 7: for “skills” better to say: develop, grow, master, improve (not fortify)
Line 9: I do believe in THE multifarious positive points of education.
Last Line: from finding satisfying jobs to developing personal skills …
It is probably true to say that most of the people believe that a university degree is the only way to get a good job.
To begin with, many people have ambitions to become a qualified professional and there is no doubt that if you want to become a doctor or an engineer etc. you should be educated. Undoubtedly, a doctor can be useful for both individuals and society.
Line 4: if you want to become a doctor, engineer, etc.,
Overall, too short, and not consisting of academic words…
Books in the future
1. How do you predict the future of the books? Won’t we have the print books any more?
2. Can you imagine other formats for our books and reading?
3. Which one do you prefer: ebooks or print books?
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Education is the sign of improvement of every country. By education specially academic education, people can gain a specific skill and lots of knowledge to achieve the specialty required in their jobs. The widespread university graduates in a society can upgrade the scientific level of that society which can bring lots of facilities and welfare for people. To put it in nut shell, education and being skilled and adroit in jobs have mutual effects on each other so that there is no substitution for them.
Line one: In every country
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Hi. In line 1: I think you should change “specially” to “especially”. In line 4: there is a miswritten word here, you should change “nut shell” to “nutshell”.
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Thanks for your assessment.
Specially is also correct.
nutshell ✅
Line 3: Widespread is not a good adjective here. I recommend “numerous” or “ubiquitous”.
Education and being skilled and adroit are so mutually intertwined that there is no genuine substitute for them.