English Storytelling on the Red Shoes

English Storytelling on the Red Shoes

English Storytelling on the Red Shoes

Story Told by LELB Society’s Student:

1. Morteza
2. Sasan

Error Correction and Feedback

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• They really catched her attention: caught her attention

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• There was a old lady: … an old lady
• Karren was a orphan girl: … an orphan girl

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• Angel: /ˈeɪn.dʒəl/
• Interested about the food: interested in the food

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• At the other day: on the other day
• She hide them: she hid them
• The old woman noticed that the girl has worn: … had worn

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• In the funeral ceremony that they participated: … they participated in
• Whispered towards the red shoes: whispered to the red shoes

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• Their shoes: her shoes / the shoes
• The shoes take the girl: … took the girl to the jungle
• She hurt: she was hurt
• He: she

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• The feet of the girl is injured: were injured

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• He: she
• Going back to home: going back home

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• The girl came back to the home: … came back home
• She prayed to the God: she prayed to God
• She wants forgiveness: she asked for forgiveness
• She promised that not to be: she promised not to be

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• Because of his behavior: … her behavior

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• Stopped from being dancing: stopped dancing