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September 7, 2015

Immigration for education is not a new phenomenon, but people have different views about it. While there are advantages to studying abroad, there are some disadvantages which some people mention.

On the one hand, some people believe that there are fruitful to immigrating for education. From their point of view, foreign universities have modern facilities that play a vital role in effective study. Such as high-tech laboratories, up-to-date libraries with rich resources that help students to study efficient. It is also maintained that the level of science is much higher compared with most of the universities in undeveloped countries. For instance, Professors and lecturers who graduate from accredited universities teach students. Therefore, pupils learn subjects from the number one tutors. Furthermore, since developed countries accept international students, it is a good chance for students to communicate with different cultures. So, it helps people to improve their social abilities.

On the other hand, some experts argue that there are negative to moving abroad to study. To begin with, students are far from their home, and they suffer from homesickness. It leads to be reluctant to study hard and may result to less scores in their examinations. Besides, from a cultural perspective, although facing different cultures raise social awareness about communication, it brings about confusing and negative attitude towards other cultures. To illustrate more, students from underdeveloped countries may tolerate various behavior and feel less self-steam. Finally, most of the students who immigrate abroad for education may move forever and their countries are deprived of having access to their qualified students. It will be a serious threat to underdeveloped countries that miss their experienced workforce and developed countries benefit from skilled foreigner workforce.

In conclusion, although moving abroad for education has some advantages, it has some disadvantages too. I personally believe that it depends on individuals to choose study in their countries or going abroad with facing all of their pros and cons.
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September 8, 2015

paragraph 1: some people believe that there are fruitful (in immigration) for education. From their point of view, foreign universities have modern facilities that play a vital role in effective study (such) as high-tech laboratories, up-to-date libraries with (rich resources of information) that help students to study efficient. (They) also (mention) that the level of science is (highly educated/ trained) compared with most of the universities in undeveloped countries. (Meanwhile, Studying abroad will not only individuals have the opportunity to immerse themselves in another culture, this is also ones chance to be a representative of their culture, and to encourage positive understanding of global diversity.)
paragraph 2: (there are some negative aspects to studying abroad.) To begin with, students are far from their home. (To illustrate,) they suffer from homesickness (that) leads to be reluctant to study hard and may result to less scores in their examinations.
paragraph 4: ….going abroad (for) facing (with) all of their pros and cons.

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September 9, 2015

In recent decades, there have been many changes in any field of knowledge and technology. Therefore, international experience is an important way for adapting oneself to these changes. When individuals finish their study abroad, they will develop new perspective on culture, language skills, and a great education system. As a result, all of these aspects are very beneficial for future works and business success. In my opinion, studying abroad has more advantages than disadvantages.
In point of fact, with studying abroad, students not only have the opportunity to immerse themselves in another culture, but also they represent their culture for the positive understanding of global diversity. Meanwhile, many employers seek out individuals with multi-lingual and multi-cultural experiences and skills. Therefore, the international and cross-cultural interpersonal skills will certainly expand people’s employment opportunities and their incomes. Besides, students will have the prospect to meet people from different social and educational backgrounds and some of these people may even become lifelong friends. Moreover, Studying abroad is a major way to experience the different styles of education because individuals will discover the new methods of study and research. Above all, these connections, insights, and outlooks are a critical result of the experience of studying abroad.
On the other hand, facing problems and difficulties is inevitable in studying abroad. For instance, the cost of studying abroad is high, but it is a worthwhile investment for progressing in life. Another problem is that students would have to adapt themselves to a new environment such as new weather, food, culture, and living styles that are totally different from home. However, being in a new place tests one’s ability to adapt to diverse situations while being able to solve the problems. Also, being away from their family and support and familiar environment will help student to become more independent. On the whole, there are more positive aspects to studying abroad despite these hindrances.
If somebody is still questioning why to study abroad, they should know that studying in a different country offers many new activities and interests that they might never discover if they stayed at home. (350 word)

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