IELTS Essay on Car Trips | IELTS Writing Task 1

IELTS Essay on Car Trips | IELTS Writing Task 1

Instructions:

The bar chart above shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by male and female drivers for a variety of purposes in 2005.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and percentages, and make comparisons where relevant.

LELB Society’s Student: Mohsen

The bar chart below demonstrates the estimated percentage of car trips happened by male drivers and female drivers for a variety of purpose (courses, visiting town, bank, Running Errands, visiting friends, recreation, work, shopping).

Overall, female drivers had more car trips (five columns of bar chart) then male drivers (three columns of bar chart). First of all, both male drivers and female drivers had most percentage car trips of the work. Whereas, male and female drivers had least percentage car trips of visiting town.

In term of work men drivers had 52 percent car trips as opposed women drivers had 39 percent car trips. after that, women driver had more car trips on shopping than men drivers (around 18 percent and10 percent respectively). Similarly, women drivers and men drivers of car trips were almost the same on bank and running errands (about 10 percent and 3 percent respectively). Visiting town and recreation were important for men. So men drivers of car trips were considerable increase than female drivers of car trips. on the other hand, women drivers of car trips on visiting friends and courses were more than men drivers of car trips.

Examiner’s Notes:

• Visual Data Analysis:
  • It is better to add the year of the survey (i.e. 2005) to the end of your introductory paragraph.
• Lexical Resources (18 of 25%)
• Task Achievement (23 of 25%)
• Coherence and Cohesion (17 of 25%)
  • You should use more conjunctions.
• Grammatical Range & Accuracy (12 of 25%)
• Word Count: “193” Great!