IELTS Writing Task 1 on computer ownership written by LELB Society students and submitted to us as a report for analysis and assessment
IELTS essay topic on computer ownership
The graph above shows computer ownership by the level of education in the years 2002 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.
You have about 20 minutes to complete the report that includes at least 150 words.
Essayist: Taraneh, LELB Society’s Student
The graph above shows computer ownership by education level in the years 2002 and 2010. The point is that it had ascending trend in all educational levels.
Computers ownership increased drastically among the people without any diploma certificate, approximately one quarter of the whole population. Moreover, it grew less than one third of the entire group among high school graduates. Similarly, among college students, it raised more than 33 percent. Computer ownership among people with bachelor’s degrees is almost one hundred percent and among people with postgraduate qualification raised exactly one hundred percent.
In conclude computer ownership had a noticeable and sharp increased among people with lower educational degrees in comparison with those who were more educated. However a lot of people tended to own a computer in 2010 compared to 2002. There is a positive trend between the positive educations with the level of computer ownership. Besides, among bachelors and post graduate students there isn’t a significant different in computer ownership during this 8 years.
Thanks for submitting your IELTS essay on computer ownership to us for analysis. Aside from the points mentioned in the online class, I hereby call your attention to the following points:
1. Either “in conclusion” or “to conclude” in the last paragraph
2. a noticeable and sharp increased among people = a noticeable and sharp increase among people