IELTS Writing Task 1 on computer ownership written by LELB Society students and submitted to us as a report for analysis and assessment IELTS essay topic on computer ownership The graph above shows computer ownership by the level of education in the years 2002 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. You have about 20 minutes to complete the report that includes at least 150 words. Essayist: Taraneh, LELB Society's Student The graph above shows computer ownership by education level in the years 2002 and 2010. The point is that it had ...
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IELTS Writing Task 1: Computer Ownership
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Thanks for submitting your IELTS essay on computer ownership to us for analysis. Aside from the points mentioned in the online class, I hereby call your attention to the following points:
1. Either “in conclusion” or “to conclude” in the last paragraph
2. a noticeable and sharp increased among people = a noticeable and sharp increase among people