IELTS Writing Task 1 on visiting museums written by LELB Society students in preparation for the IELTS exam
Instruction
The graph above shows the number of times museums have been visited. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.
You have about 20 minutes to complete the report that includes at least 150 words.
Essayist: Taraneh, LELB Society’s Student
This graph compares the number of visitors who visited National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum between the years 2007 and 2012. The visitors who visited the National Gallery rose gradually from years 2007 to 2012. It seems that it has attracted so many attentions.
Victoria and Albert Museum experienced noticeable visitors during the year 2007 and 2008, approximately 14 millions, but after that the number of visitors decreased drastically near 9 millions and its trend continued even the following year which the number reached 6 and a half millions. Then it slightly grows and reached up to10 millions on the year 2012.
The visitors of British Museum, was approximately 12 and a half millions, then the number of visitors dropped by a half in following year. After that it started to grow gradually and constantly.
Briefly speaking, the visitors of National Gallery Museum increased gradually without stopping. The visitors of Victoria and Albert Museum had experienced ups and downs. Although the visitors of British Museum had experienced a sudden and drastic decline in the year 2008, it slightly underwent a growth after that.
Thank you so much for submitting your IELTS report to us for analysis and assessment. Here are some points apart from the feedback that was provided in the class:
1. on the year = in the year
2. it has attracted so many attentions = it has attracted so much attention