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IELTS Writing Task 1: Visiting Museums

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  • Instruction: The above shows the number of times museums have been visited. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the .
  • You have about 20 minutes to complete the report that includes at least 150 words.
  • Essayist: Taraneh

This graph compares the number of visitors who visited National Gallery, Victoria and Albert and British between the years 2007 and 2012. The visitors who visited the National Gallery rose from years 2007 to 2012. It seems that it has attracted so many attentions.

Victoria and Albert Museum experienced noticeable visitors during the year 2007 and 2008, 14 millions, but after that the number of visitors decreased near 9 millions and its continued even the following year which the number reached 6 and a half millions. Then it grows and reached up to10 millions on the year 2012.

The visitors of British Museum, was approximately 12 and a half millions, then the number of visitors dropped by a half in following year. After that it started to grow gradually and .

, the visitors of National Gallery Museum increased gradually without stopping. The visitors of Victoria and Albert Museum had experienced ups and downs. Although the visitors of British Museum had experienced a sudden and drastic in the year 2008, it slightly underwent a growth after that. (188 words)

 

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    Dr. Hariri
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    Would you rather be happy yet slow-witted and unimaginative, or unhappy yet bright and creative? For instance, would you rather live the life of a brilliant yet tortured artist, such as Vincent van Gogh, or that of a happy but carefree soul who is a bit simple-minded?

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    Sasan
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    I prefer to challenge this question at first and bring up my viewpoint next.
    There are different successful people in the world who reached the apex through different procedures. Although some have faced torture to reach their goals, it does not mean we have to necessarily lose something in our life to climb the ladder of success. Anyway, I suppose the most enjoyable part of life is making progress and relying on your abilities to flourish and thrive. So, I personally go for intelligence and innovation rather than happiness along with naivety. Many people have lived an ordinary life so far and repeating this story can never excite me at all. We need to gain new adventurous experiences and foster our abilities so as to break out of comfort zone.

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