Topic: In some countries, the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment? Give reasons for your answer. Essayist: Taraneh In my idea, thirty years of being in paid employment is enough, which is almost in the 60 decades of life. After this amount of years, employees become bored with routines and failed to concentrating effectively. On the other hand, the young are so motivated to start their jobs and ...
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Essay 13 on the Age of Retirement
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Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl is an English and Persian instructor, educator, researcher, inventor, published author, blogger, SEO expert, website developer, entrepreneur, and the creator of LELB Society. He's got a PhD in TEFL (Teaching English as a Foreign Language).
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