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IELTS Essay Sample on Traffic Problems


In recent years, we have been suffering from the phenomenon of heavy traffic in big cities, such as Tehran. There have been some debates on solving this problem between the professions. Thus, it has jeopardizing humans’ healthiness. One group believes that government should tax private cars heavily and use the money to provide cheap or free rail travel. On the other hand, the other group does not agree with them. I go with the first one.

Putting tax burden for private cars have so many advantages. First, it will decrease the number of private cars in the street. Second, we will benefit from more clean air in our city. Moreover, the number of people with lung cancer will be reduced. Third, in this way we can decline the utilizing of fuel and gases. So the environment will remain safe. Last but not least, we can save our time in order not to stay in traffic for so long and using our time for walking during a day that is essential for our health.

However, it has some disadvantages, too. For instance, the old people or octogenarians cannot afford to pay the tax, nor have the ability to use the modes of transports. So government should provide some private or public vehicles just for old people to communicate easily. Furthermore, it may become so crowded and a thong of people gathers in the same place.

Briefly speaking, increasing the rate of tax is beneficial and good solution to decrease the . Besides, the pros overweigh its cons. (257 words)

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    Dr. Hariri
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    Would you rather be happy yet slow-witted and unimaginative, or unhappy yet bright and creative? For instance, would you rather live the life of a brilliant yet tortured artist, such as Vincent van Gogh, or that of a happy but carefree soul who is a bit simple-minded?

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    Sasan
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    I prefer to challenge this question at first and bring up my viewpoint next.
    There are different successful people in the world who reached the apex through different procedures. Although some have faced torture to reach their goals, it does not mean we have to necessarily lose something in our life to climb the ladder of success. Anyway, I suppose the most enjoyable part of life is making progress and relying on your abilities to flourish and thrive. So, I personally go for intelligence and innovation rather than happiness along with naivety. Many people have lived an ordinary life so far and repeating this story can never excite me at all. We need to gain new adventurous experiences and foster our abilities so as to break out of comfort zone.

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