Science Qualifications IELTS Writing Task 1
Science Qualifications IELTS Writing Task 1
Visual Data: Noun
!["data]("https://www.lelb.net/wp-content/uploads/2017/09/data.jpg")
/ˈdeɪ.tə/ US /-ţə/
group noun [U]
information, especially facts or numbers, collected for examination and consideration and used to help decision-making, or information in an electronic form that can be stored and processed by a computer:
The data was/were collected by various researchers.“>data adopted from https://www.ielts-exam.net/
Instructions:
The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
LELB Society’s Student: Sasan
The chart demonstrates the percentages of people who have different science qualifications in two countries, namely Singapore and Malaysia.
Generally, it can be seen that in both nations smaller groups of people go through higher levels of education.
Unfortunately, the people who have no qualifications constitute a large group of people in Singapore and Malaysia((you could add: to be more precise)), at 60% and 65% respectively. The second group of people who have school leaving qualifications accounts for 30% and 35% of people in Singapore and Malaysia approximately. Furthermore, when it comes to bachelor’s degree((degree holders)), Singapore overtakes Malaysia, making up 20% and 10% of people in turn. Turning to the tiny group of people who have master’s degree((degrees)), they compose 3% of the population((the whole / entire population)) in both countries.
Examiner’s Notes:
- Visual Data: Noun
Analysis:
/ˈdeɪ.tə/ US /-ţə/
group noun [U]
information, especially facts or numbers, collected for examination and consideration and used to help decision-making, or information in an electronic form that can be stored and processed by a computer:
The data was/were collected by various researchers.“>Data - Choice of Words (Diction): Good
- Coherence: Great
- Cohesion: Great
- Grammar: Excellent
- Reasoning:
- The proportion of uneducated to highly educated people in both countries is 20 to 1 respectively, which per se indicates the wide gap in the entire spectrum.
- Word Count: “121” Insufficient number of words
The chart demonstrates the percentages of people who have different science qualifications in two countries, namely Singapore and Malaysia.
Generally, it can be seen that in both nations smaller groups of people go through higher levels of education.
Unfortunately, the people who have no qualifications constitute a large group of people in Singapore and Malaysia, at 60% and 65% respectively. The second group of people who have school leaving qualifications accounts for 30% and 35% of people in Singapore and Malaysia approximately. Furthermore, when it comes to bachelor’s degree, Singapore overtakes Malaysia, making up 20% and 10% of people in turn. Turning to the tiny group of people who have master’s degree, they compose 3% of the population in both countries.