IELTS Essay on Science vs. Art IELTS Essay on Science vs. Art Topic Some people believe that, between science and art, the former carries more importance to lead a better life. Others, nevertheless, hold quite the opposite idea. To which group of people do you belong. Bring reasons to support your claim. Note. If one side of the argument is taken, you should argue for the other side. IELTS Candidate: Sassan Although art can exert influence in the culture and history of a nation, I suppose that science exceeds art in importance, when it comes to handling your life. Your introduction is rather short. It's recommended ...
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1. … many development -> many developments
2. a lot of of -> a lot of
3. a personal interest -> personal interest
4. You need to add a comma after “however” in the last paragraph.
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