Concrete Production IELTS Writing Task 1
Concrete Production IELTS Writing Task 1
Instructions
The diagram above illustrates the procedure and equipment deployed in the process of cement production, and how cement is used to produce concrete for construction purposes.
Elaborate on the process of cement and concrete manufacturing as shown in the diagram.
LELB Society’s Student: Mohammad
These two diagrams illustrate the simplified procedure and equipment which are used in the cement plants, and how cement is used to produce concrete.
As we know cement is the most important gradient of concrete which have being a crucial material in the construction for ages, especially in case of the building houses. As the left-hand figure shows there are five main phases in a cement manufacturing plant that should have been taken by two raw materials who are limestone and clay to cement become ready for shipping. These five steps are crushing, mixing, heating, grinding and packing respectively. First of all, these two components are broken to small size by a crusher. After that the materials go through some important processing equipment where they should blend and experience high temperatures in mixer and rotating heater respectively before they get ready for final separation in grinder and then the packed cement can be sold.
As the right-hand figure shows, the final production of a cement plant is the one of most important gradient of making concrete process. Mortar, (concrete that have not gotten hard yet) consist of gravel, sand, cement and water in amount of 50, 25, 15 and 10 percent respectively. These four ingredients should be blended well in a mixer to prepare and then it can be used in construction process.
Video of IELTS essay on concrete production
Examiner’s Notes:
- Visual Data Analysis:
- Choice of Words (Diction): Good
- Coherence: Good
- Cohesion: Average
- Grammar: Below average
- Reasoning: Good
- Word Count: “223” Your report is rather too long. You should use at least 150 words, and the number of words you’ve used is slightly over the expected range.
These two diagrams illustrate the simplified procedure and equipment which are used in the cement plants, and how cement is used to produce concrete.
As we know cement is the most important gradient of concrete which have being a crucial material in the construction for ages, especially in case of the building houses. As the left-hand figure shows there are five main phases in a cement manufacturing plant that should have been taken by two raw materials who are limestone and clay to cement become ready for shipping. These five steps are crushing, mixing, heating, grinding and packing respectively. First of all, these two components are broken to small size by a crusher. After that the materials go through some important processing equipment where they should blend and experience high temperatures in mixer and rotating heater respectively before they get ready for final separation in grinder and then the packed cement can be sold.
As the right-hand figure shows, the final production of a cement plant is the one of most important gradient of making concrete process. Mortar, (concrete that have not gotten hard yet) consist of gravel, sand, cement and water in amount of 50, 25, 15 and 10 percent respectively. These four ingredients should be blended well in a mixer to prepare and then it can be used in construction process.
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