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June 4, 2022 at 5:43 pm #104982
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
Keymaster
WOW! That is amazing, Armaghan! You really have a special and creative talent for literature. I’ve no doubt that you’re already into this activity. Your literary style is extraordinary! You write like professional novelists!
My feedback:
- visit him –> visit her
- on weekends / at weekends
- records store / shop
- change my choice –> change my mind
- attend college