Reply To: Dealing with a Dilemma – Open-ended Story

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WOW! That is amazing, Armaghan! You really have a special and creative talent for literature. I’ve no doubt that you’re already into this activity. Your literary style is extraordinary! You write like professional novelists!
My feedback:

  • visit him –> visit her
  • on weekends / at weekends
  • records store / shop
  • change my choice –> change my mind
  • attend college
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