[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

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1. they get much / far so involved with
so much + Noun
much so + adj / adv
2. They both are so important that there should be a balance between them
You have used ‘that’ and for this reason, it’s better to use ‘so’ in order to draw a conclusion.
3. not the whole of it
4. if we get too involved with (TOO)
to vs. too
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