IELTS Essay on Computer Dependency in Education
IELTS Essay on Computer Dependency in Education
Topic
School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Do you agree or disagree?
LELB Society’s Essayist: Charos Karimboyeva
Nowadays technology is developing day by day. Moreover these inventions bring not only advantages but also disadvantages. Some people think that school children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This has a negative effect on reading and writing skills. Also teachers should not use computers in the classroom. Instead, they should go back to teaching basic study skills. I do not agree on / about something totally these informations information.
Today most of students use the computer in their study. Firstly it is a more effective way to learn any subjects. Secondly they can learn everything more cheaply — using an adverb in a comparative mode and convenient through the computer or internet.
On the other hand, introducing usage of computer which is negative affect their learning language abilities because of automatic correction options. For instance, if the student writes an essay in Microsoft programme, he or she does not focus on grammatical and spelling mistakes because computers can correct them automatically with a button click.
In conclusion, I agree that students and teachers should use computers but with a limit. If they exceed their limit, it will have negative effects on students’ skills.
- It’s not still clear whether you agree on the central idea of the topic or not. You should clarify that in the introductory paragraph.
- Cohesion and Cohesion (45% of 25%)
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy (48% of 25%)
- Lexical Resources (58% of 25%)
- Task Achievement (65% of 25%)
- Word Count: “179” The number is far too insufficient.
