IELTS Writing Task 1 as a graph on the age of students in 4 different countries from 1961 to 2011 with full essay and assessment submitted to us by one of our students. Video of age of students IELTS graph https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LXp8L4iqmY Write a report on the age of students The graph above displays the proportion of university students in the 18-40 age bracket in 4 different countries from 1961 to 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Source of visual data: Makkar IELTS IELTS Writing Task 1 on the age of ...
IELTS Writing Task 1 Graph on Age of Students + Analysis
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Thank you so much for writing a report on this graph on the age of students.
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1. In complete sentences, we should write: the Philippines, because it is the combination of various islands.
2. The most proportion has Thailand = Thailand had the highest / greatest / largest proportion of …
3. the less proportion had Malaysia = Malaysia had the lowest / smallest proportion …
4. You have given a fairly good overview of the graph in your introduction.
5. In your second paragraph, you’ve made a judgment on some improvement. Yet, we’re just observing an increase in the rate of older students registering for university education. This phenomenon is not necessarily an improvement.