English essay on health care written by LELB Society students to practice writing for IELTS
Essay topic on health care
The quality of health care a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of health care for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Essayist: Taraneh, LELB Society’s Student
The following essay is about the most controversial skirmish over the duty of the government. There is a huge debate over this subject that it is the government’s duty to provide high level of health care for all its citizens without charging them.
I do not concur with this subject completely. The government cannot afford the amount of money that is needed for the health care for excessive citizens. In my idea, people should notice this fact and help the government. On the other hand, the government ought to pay the half of money and people should pay the other half. In addition, health care cost ought not to be so high that only affluent people could pay and from another perspective the cost of health care shouldn’t be that low, either.
However, some people believe that expenses should be completely free because so many people can’t afford to pay this money. As a result, their lives may be endangered so it is not fair for them to lose their lives. In addition, these indigent families may turn their attention to crimes and the rate of crime would be increased in the society and the egregious behavior would be boasted.
As a whole, the government cannot afford to pay the whole cost, but they should pay half of it. On the other hand, people should help the government, pay the other half.
Feedback
1. the egregious behavior would be boasted. = the egregious behavior would be boosted.
2. people should help the government, pay the other half. = people should help the government pay the other half. (no comma after the government)
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