Writing Practice on Camping Vs. Hotel Booking
Writing Practice on Camping Vs. Hotel Booking
Topic
Please argue for either camping or hotel booking.
NOTE. If one side of the argument is taken by another essayist, you MUST select the other side even if it’s against your will.
Camping
During an expedition, some people prefer to camp while others may prefer to stay in a hotel. I believe those who stay in a camp could enjoy their trip more. First, they can plan their journey more flexibly. There are several picturesque scenery on the road that are far away from any hotel. Besides you can not experience a stunning dawn from a suite. Although it might seem difficult and dangerous to sleep in a wild nature overnight, but it is full of adventure and new experiences. These people could cruise longer path in contrast with those who are stuck to the urban centers.
In my idea, spending time in a hotel means that someone relocates his/her house comfortableness into a hotel. Also the people who are accustomed to staying in a hotel are restricted to the surrounding area near the hotel or even the city where the hotel is placed. Last but not least, a stay in a camp cost a pity while an accommodation in a standard hotel could cost a major part of total trip expenses.
* scenery is uncountable – You cannot use “several” with it.
* cannot
* in a suite
* in the wild nature
* “Although” and “but” must not be used together.
* longer paths / a longer path
* costs a pittance
* “Accommodation” is uncountable.
Hotel booking
I strongly support hotel booking rather than camping. Although hotels are expensive, everything is arranged in advance and I do not have to be worried about basic needs such as bathrooms, toilets, bedrooms, etc. From my point of view, if I decide to hit the road, it means that I need to be free and easy. In fact, hectic lifestyle challenges all of my skills and in other words, in daily life, I am busy like a beaver and preoccupied with different challenges and difficulties. So, I do look forward to a condition in which I do not need to be concerned about anything. In fact, as I am taking an excursion, it means that I require safety, tranquil atmosphere, peace of mind, superb foods, and so on. Also, in order to inject some excitement to my jaunt, I prefer to go through various activities. For instance, I would try bungee jumping or go diving. Furthermore, I am hardened to an urban life which is organized by nature, and booking a hotel let me make my journey as systematic as possible.
* a hectic lifestyle
* I am as busy as a beaver
* booking a hotel lets me …
Reply to “hotel booking”
I strongly support hotel booking rather than camping. Although hotels are expensive, everything is arranged in advance and I do not have to be worried about basic needs such as bathrooms, toilets, bedrooms, etc. From my point of view, if I decide to hit the road, it means that I need to be free and easy. In fact, hectic lifestyle challenges all of my skills and in other words, in daily life, I am busy like a beaver and preoccupied with different challenges and difficulties. So, I do look forward to a condition in which I do not need to be concerned about anything. In fact, as I am taking an excursion, it means that I require safety, tranquil atmosphere, peace of mind, superb foods, and so on. Also, in order to inject some excitement to my jaunt, I prefer to go through various activities. For instance, I would try bungee jumping or go diving. Furthermore, I am hardened to an urban life which is organized by nature, and booking a hotel let me make my journey as systematic as possible.
* a hectic lifestyle
* I am as busy as a beaver
* booking a hotel lets me …
Reply to “camping”
Please argue for either “camping” or “hotel booking”.
NOTE. If one side of the argument is taken by another essayist, you MUST select the other side even if it’s against your will.
During an expedition, some people prefer to camp while others may prefer to stay in a hotel. I believe those who stay in a camp could enjoy their trip more. First, they can plan their journey more flexibly. There are several picturesque scenery on the road that are far away from any hotel. Besides you can not experience a stunning dawn from a suite. Although it might seem difficult and dangerous to sleep in a wild nature overnight, but it is full of adventure and new experiences. These people could cruise longer path in contrast with those who are stuck to the urban centers.
In my idea, spending time in a hotel means that someone relocates his/her house comfortableness into a hotel. Also the people who are accustomed to staying in a hotel are restricted to the surrounding area near the hotel or even the city where the hotel is placed. Last but not least, a stay in a camp cost a pity while an accommodation in a standard hotel could cost a major part of total trip expenses.
* scenery is uncountable – You cannot use “several” with it.
* cannot
* in a suite
* in the wild nature
* “Although” and “but” must not be used together.
* longer paths / a longer path
* costs a pittance
* “Accommodation” is uncountable.