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November 10, 2023 at 1:45 pm in reply to: Hachi Dog’s Tale Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122190
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterWell-written and flawless!
I was also so dramatically touched by the movie that I could not watch it more than twice for fear that I would burst into tears again.November 10, 2023 at 1:39 pm in reply to: Hachi Dog’s Tale Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122189Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterI like the way you ended your comment!
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1. The difference between “hole” and “whole”
2. he’s owner = his ownerNovember 10, 2023 at 1:31 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122188Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterYour comment was so insightful, doctor. Thank you so much.
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* William Blake
* encouraged
* going to the woods
* the beauty of nature or natural beautyNovember 10, 2023 at 1:25 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122186Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThat’s interesting! Many eminent people or scholars didn’t like schools at all, for example, Isaac Newton, Thomas Edison, etc.
November 10, 2023 at 1:20 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122185Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThat is a very good question. As far as I know, schools were not closed for entirely 3 months during the summer in western countries. What’s more, some make-up or extracurricular classes would be held on some summer days in the past.
November 10, 2023 at 1:17 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122184Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterYou should know the difference between “you’re” and “your”.
November 2, 2023 at 7:21 pm in reply to: Life of Pi Movie Review in Film Criticism Course Forum #122068Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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* spend = spent (past and past participle)
* reached for the jungle
* left Pi
* goed = went to the jungleNovember 2, 2023 at 7:17 pm in reply to: Around the Corner by Charles Hanson Towne with Video #122067Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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* the difference between “right” and “write”
* this people = these peopleNovember 2, 2023 at 7:14 pm in reply to: Around the Corner by Charles Hanson Towne with Video #122065Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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* ocean
* … that we (subject) become totally unaware …
* as it was mentioned (passive)
* things that are not possible / impossible to get / obtain again
* How sad reality and life sometimes are! (exclamation mark)November 2, 2023 at 7:08 pm in reply to: Around the Corner by Charles Hanson Towne with Video #122064Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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* the difference between message and massage
* to know how she is doing (noun phrase structure as an object)
* I thought they would eventually …October 26, 2023 at 6:53 pm in reply to: Captain Fantastic Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #121922Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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* the difference between “learn” and “teach” in your second sentence
* The past form of “sing” is “sang”.
* They lived so healthily.October 26, 2023 at 6:38 pm in reply to: Captain Fantastic Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #121921Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterAs you correctly mentioned, in this film, the main character, the father, had a totally weird attitude toward parenting and life. I believe this attitude is acceptable if and only if it is directed to its holder, i.e. the father. In my view, the father had no right to raise his children according to his own philosophy and interests.
October 26, 2023 at 6:13 pm in reply to: Captain Fantastic Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #121918Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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* some how = somehow
* children’s = childrenOctober 26, 2023 at 6:09 pm in reply to: Best English Quote on Philosophy of life by Henry David Thoreau #121917Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterI agree. Both this quote and the movie are extraordinary. Life is too short and precious to be wasted on the plans and goals set by others.
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* Dead Poets SocietyOctober 26, 2023 at 5:58 pm in reply to: Best English Quote on Philosophy of life by Henry David Thoreau #121914Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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