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November 25, 2023 at 12:09 am in reply to: Little Miss Sunshine Movie Review in Film Criticism #122494
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThanks a lot for your thorough comment.
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1. it help me = it helped me
2. you just have to don’t give up = you just have to not give up
3. every single one of them were = every single one of them was
4. Olive, which was = Olive, who / that was …
5. such a good supporters = such good supportersNovember 25, 2023 at 12:03 am in reply to: Little Miss Sunshine Movie Review in Film Criticism #122493
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you for your comment, Soroosh. Yet, I need to say that, in my opinion, we were not watching a very happy family in this tragicomedy.
November 16, 2023 at 9:16 pm in reply to: As Good As It Gets Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122340
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterWell-written! I totally agree. He was changing a lot as he had enough motivation to go through the series of changes. He started from a misanthrope and got closer to a philanthrope by the end of the film.
November 16, 2023 at 9:11 pm in reply to: As Good As It Gets Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122339
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThat was quite unexpected to see the main character making a connection with the dog.
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1. The old man was playing the piano (past continuous tense)
2. it was really coolNovember 10, 2023 at 1:50 pm in reply to: Hachi Dog’s Tale Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122191
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1. … never left the other one alone
2. professor = the professorNovember 10, 2023 at 1:45 pm in reply to: Hachi Dog’s Tale Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122190
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterWell-written and flawless!
I was also so dramatically touched by the movie that I could not watch it more than twice for fear that I would burst into tears again.November 10, 2023 at 1:39 pm in reply to: Hachi Dog’s Tale Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122189
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterI like the way you ended your comment!
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1. The difference between “hole” and “whole”
2. he’s owner = his ownerNovember 10, 2023 at 1:31 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122188
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterYour comment was so insightful, doctor. Thank you so much.
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* William Blake
* encouraged
* going to the woods
* the beauty of nature or natural beautyNovember 10, 2023 at 1:25 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122186
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThat’s interesting! Many eminent people or scholars didn’t like schools at all, for example, Isaac Newton, Thomas Edison, etc.
November 10, 2023 at 1:20 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122185
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThat is a very good question. As far as I know, schools were not closed for entirely 3 months during the summer in western countries. What’s more, some make-up or extracurricular classes would be held on some summer days in the past.
November 10, 2023 at 1:17 pm in reply to: The School Boy by William Blake + Video for ESL Students #122184
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterYou should know the difference between “you’re” and “your”.
November 2, 2023 at 7:21 pm in reply to: Life of Pi Movie Review in Film Criticism Course Forum #122068
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* spend = spent (past and past participle)
* reached for the jungle
* left Pi
* goed = went to the jungleNovember 2, 2023 at 7:17 pm in reply to: Around the Corner by Charles Hanson Towne with Video #122067
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* the difference between “right” and “write”
* this people = these peopleNovember 2, 2023 at 7:14 pm in reply to: Around the Corner by Charles Hanson Towne with Video #122065
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* ocean
* … that we (subject) become totally unaware …
* as it was mentioned (passive)
* things that are not possible / impossible to get / obtain again
* How sad reality and life sometimes are! (exclamation mark)November 2, 2023 at 7:08 pm in reply to: Around the Corner by Charles Hanson Towne with Video #122064
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* the difference between message and massage
* to know how she is doing (noun phrase structure as an object)
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