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Thank you for your comments on the film, About Schmidt.
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1. so much busy = much so busy
2. with his works = with his work (usually singular)
3. that was near totally unaware = that he was … (This clause must have a subject as well.)
4. new generation = the new generation
5. methods in = methods of / forThanks for commenting on About Schmidt.
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1. he really talked weird = He spoke in a weird mannerThank you for your comment.
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1. I have too admit = I have to admit
2. whether Schmidt can prevent = whether Schmidt could prevent
3. what the movie is trying to say = what the movie was trying to say
4. at the end vs. in the end
5. whom he have never met = whom he had never metThank you, Armaghan, for leaving such a long comment and criticism on Ex Machina!
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1. AL = AI (artificial intelligence)
2. thinking how can it be possible = thinking how it can be possible
3. an AL have feelings = an AI has feelings
4. it tured out = it turned outThank you, Dr. Hooshmand, for criticizing the film, Ex Machina.
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1. made me to think = made me think
2. You should know the difference between “think of” and “think about”. For this context, the latter is more accurate.
3. a matter of much debateSuch a long and complete comment! Thank you, Soroosh.
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1. bed thing = bad thing, which must be a typo.Thank you, Parnian. Such a concise and inclusive comment!
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1. it didn’t bored me = it didn’t bore me
2. I didn’t mind about what = I didn’t mind what …
3. Ava is actually = Ava was actuallyThank you for your comment on the psychological thriller, The Tenant.
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1. … masterpiece deserved to be watch = … masterpiece that deserves to be watched
2. holocost = holocaust
3. who considered as foreigner = who was considered to be a foreigner
4. Frence = Franceخیلی خوشحال هستم که این خبر خوب را می شنوم. شما در مدت کمتر از دو ماه توانستید پیشرفت خیلی خوبی در خواندن و نوشتن زبان فارسی به دست بیاورید. به نظر من، پیشرفت شما در این مدت کوتاه دو دلیل مهم دارد.
اول اینکه، شما پشتکار خیلی خوبی در یادگیری زبان فارسی دارید و به عنوان یک فارسی آموز بزرگسال، انگیزه زیادی برای فراگیری زبان فارسی دارید. به همین دلیل، در این مدت کوتاه، از راه کامنت گذاشتن در پایین درسها، خواندن و نوشتن فارسی را تمرین کردید. در این مدت کوتاه، از طرف شما، حدود 100 کامنت در مدرسه فارسی آنلاین ما گذاشته شده است و ما به همه آنها پاسخ داده ایم.
دلیل دوم هم این است که شما از راه آموزش غیر همزمان زبان فارسی در کنار کلاس آنلاین فارسی، به یادگیری زبان فارسی خود، عمق زیادی داده اید به گونه ای که آموزش زبان فارسی هرگز محدود به کلاس زبان فارسی نشده است. از آنجایی که همه درسهای فارسی ما دارای ویدیو هستند، شما قبل و بعد از هر کلاس نیز می توانید به آموزش زبان فارسی بپردازید.
با آرزوی موفقیت بیشتر برای شما.
Yes, you are right. Certainly, freedom is one of the most significant aspects of this animated movie. Thanks so much for your comment.
Thank you for raising crucial points about the characters and plot of this animated movie in your flawless comment.
Thank you for your comment, Soroosh.
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1. What do you mean by “spectfull”?
2. I would like to watch it (to vs. too)
3. one of the best ones I’ve ever seen / watchedSuch a philosophical comment!
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1. tell us that you shouldn’t = tell us that we shouldn’t
2. and learn how to = and learning how to … (in parallel to the other gerunds)
3. life is also in watching the leaves = this sentences appears to be ambiguous and strange perhaps due to being translated literally from Persian.Thank you for your comment.
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an very inspiring animation = a very inspiring animation
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I agree with you on the inspiring message of Soul. Nevertheless, I couldn’t approve of the form through which the message was conveyed. I personally found it too whimsical. This weird type of form negatively impacted on the great message.