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This was not a film, Soroosh, but a poem by Robert Frost. And about your question, I guess the poet was attracted to the tranquility and beauty of the scene covered with snow, and because of that, he wanted to stay there longer than expected.
That’s a fairly decent comment you’ve posted, Soroosh. Keep doing that. Their language was not alphabetical like English, Persian, etc., but logographical, like Chinese. It means that for each word or concept, there’s a corresponding image or sign to represent the concept.
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1. they right a long sentence = they write a long sentenceSuch a fair comparison you’ve made between this poem and Sohrab Sepehri’s! Thank you! I wish we could analyze his poems as well, but this is basically an English course.
You got the whole poem right. I selected and recited this poem simple because I’ve experienced this dilemma a great number of times. Like the poet, Robert Frost, I’m also fascinated by nature. For this reason, I often allocate some short time to myself in the nature each day, no matter what.
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1. at the first place = in the first place (as a conjunction, did you mean that?)
2. what if I knew what will happen in the future = what if I knew what would happen in the future
3. I thing that = I think thatFeedback
1. actings = acting (uncountable)
2. mind blowing = mind-blowing (a hyphenated word)
3. A simple typo (i = I)
4. I question myself what would I do = I question myself what I would doFeedback
1. I’d actually saw this film with my sister some few years ago = I saw this film with my sister a few years ago (simple past tense)
2. secne =sceneFeedback
1. I have watched this movie a few years ago = I watched this movie a few years ago (simple past tense)
2. and since, it haven’t gotten out of my head = and since then, it hasn’t gotten out of my head
3. I was also inspired my Maggie’s endeavor and determination. = I was also inspired by Maggie’s endeavor and determination.
4. Maggie was a dear to Frankie = Maggie was dear to Frankie (used as an adjective)Feedback
1. loosing and death is not always a bad thing = losing and death are not always bad things
2. and always had the smile on = and always had a smile on her face
3. champion of resistance = the champion of resistanceThank you, Armaghan, for posting such a great comment on Click!
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1. every minute and moment of life is essential = every minute and moment of life are essentialYour comment about Click was amazing, Soroosh! I liked it so much.
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1. we should use every second of our life for good and don’t waste it for nothing = We should use every second of our life for good, and avoid wasting it for nothing.
2. Newman understand that = Newman understood that
3. he was pretty happy that live his own life again = He was petty happy to live his own life againThank you for your comments on the film, About Schmidt.
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1. so much busy = much so busy
2. with his works = with his work (usually singular)
3. that was near totally unaware = that he was … (This clause must have a subject as well.)
4. new generation = the new generation
5. methods in = methods of / forThanks for commenting on About Schmidt.
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1. he really talked weird = He spoke in a weird manner