[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

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1. actings = acting (uncountable)
2. mind blowing = mind-blowing (a hyphenated word)
3. A simple typo (i = I)
4. I question myself what would I do = I question myself what I would do

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

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1. I’d actually saw this film with my sister some few years ago = I saw this film with my sister a few years ago (simple past tense)
2. secne =scene

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

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1. I have watched this movie a few years ago = I watched this movie a few years ago (simple past tense)
2. and since, it haven’t gotten out of my head = and since then, it hasn’t gotten out of my head
3. I was also inspired my Maggie’s endeavor and determination. = I was also inspired by Maggie’s endeavor and determination.
4. Maggie was a dear to Frankie = Maggie was dear to Frankie (used as an adjective)

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

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1. loosing and death is not always a bad thing = losing and death are not always bad things
2. and always had the smile on = and always had a smile on her face
3. champion of resistance = the champion of resistance

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you, Armaghan, for posting such a great comment on Click!
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1. every minute and moment of life is essential = every minute and moment of life are essential

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Your comment about Click was amazing, Soroosh! I liked it so much.
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1. we should use every second of our life for good and don’t waste it for nothing = We should use every second of our life for good, and avoid wasting it for nothing.
2. Newman understand that = Newman understood that
3. he was pretty happy that live his own life again = He was petty happy to live his own life again

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

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1. put first thing first = put first things first
2. on a clever way = in a clever way

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you for your comments on the film, About Schmidt.
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1. so much busy = much so busy
2. with his works = with his work (usually singular)
3. that was near totally unaware = that he was … (This clause must have a subject as well.)
4. new generation = the new generation
5. methods in = methods of / for

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thanks for commenting on About Schmidt.
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1. he really talked weird = He spoke in a weird manner

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Thank you for your comment.
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1. I have too admit = I have to admit
2. whether Schmidt can prevent = whether Schmidt could prevent
3. what the movie is trying to say = what the movie was trying to say
4. at the end vs. in the end
5. whom he have never met = whom he had never met

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you, Armaghan, for leaving such a long comment and criticism on Ex Machina!
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1. AL = AI (artificial intelligence)
2. thinking how can it be possible = thinking how it can be possible
3. an AL have feelings = an AI has feelings
4. it tured out = it turned out

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you, Dr. Hooshmand, for criticizing the film, Ex Machina.
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1. made me to think = made me think
2. You should know the difference between “think of” and “think about”. For this context, the latter is more accurate.
3. a matter of much debate

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Such a long and complete comment! Thank you, Soroosh.
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1. bed thing = bad thing, which must be a typo.

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you, Parnian. Such a concise and inclusive comment!
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1. it didn’t bored me = it didn’t bore me
2. I didn’t mind about what = I didn’t mind what …
3. Ava is actually = Ava was actually

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you for your comment on the psychological thriller, The Tenant.
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1. … masterpiece deserved to be watch = … masterpiece that deserves to be watched
2. holocost = holocaust
3. who considered as foreigner = who was considered to be a foreigner
4. Frence = France

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