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December 17, 2023 at 12:47 am in reply to: نظر من درباره تدریس زبان فارسی در مدرسه فارسی آنلاین #122962
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
Keymasterخیلی خوشحال هستم که این خبر خوب را می شنوم. شما در مدت کمتر از دو ماه توانستید پیشرفت خیلی خوبی در خواندن و نوشتن زبان فارسی به دست بیاورید. به نظر من، پیشرفت شما در این مدت کوتاه دو دلیل مهم دارد.
اول اینکه، شما پشتکار خیلی خوبی در یادگیری زبان فارسی دارید و به عنوان یک فارسی آموز بزرگسال، انگیزه زیادی برای فراگیری زبان فارسی دارید. به همین دلیل، در این مدت کوتاه، از راه کامنت گذاشتن در پایین درسها، خواندن و نوشتن فارسی را تمرین کردید. در این مدت کوتاه، از طرف شما، حدود 100 کامنت در مدرسه فارسی آنلاین ما گذاشته شده است و ما به همه آنها پاسخ داده ایم.
دلیل دوم هم این است که شما از راه آموزش غیر همزمان زبان فارسی در کنار کلاس آنلاین فارسی، به یادگیری زبان فارسی خود، عمق زیادی داده اید به گونه ای که آموزش زبان فارسی هرگز محدود به کلاس زبان فارسی نشده است. از آنجایی که همه درسهای فارسی ما دارای ویدیو هستند، شما قبل و بعد از هر کلاس نیز می توانید به آموزش زبان فارسی بپردازید.
با آرزوی موفقیت بیشتر برای شما.
December 15, 2023 at 8:52 pm in reply to: Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron Analysis and Review #122940Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterYes, you are right. Certainly, freedom is one of the most significant aspects of this animated movie. Thanks so much for your comment.
December 15, 2023 at 8:50 pm in reply to: Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron Analysis and Review #122939Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThank you for raising crucial points about the characters and plot of this animated movie in your flawless comment.
December 15, 2023 at 8:48 pm in reply to: Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron Analysis and Review #122938Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterExcellent and perfect criticism. Thank you so much.
December 7, 2023 at 6:41 pm in reply to: Soul Movie Review and Analysis in Film Criticism Forum #122755Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThank you for your comment, Soroosh.
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1. What do you mean by “spectfull”?
2. I would like to watch it (to vs. too)
3. one of the best ones I’ve ever seen / watchedDecember 7, 2023 at 1:46 pm in reply to: Soul Movie Review and Analysis in Film Criticism Forum #122751Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterSuch a philosophical comment!
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1. tell us that you shouldn’t = tell us that we shouldn’t
2. and learn how to = and learning how to … (in parallel to the other gerunds)
3. life is also in watching the leaves = this sentences appears to be ambiguous and strange perhaps due to being translated literally from Persian.December 5, 2023 at 12:45 am in reply to: Soul Movie Review and Analysis in Film Criticism Forum #122710Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThank you for your comment.
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an very inspiring animation = a very inspiring animation
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I agree with you on the inspiring message of Soul. Nevertheless, I couldn’t approve of the form through which the message was conveyed. I personally found it too whimsical. This weird type of form negatively impacted on the great message.December 1, 2023 at 5:59 pm in reply to: Good Will Hunting Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122623Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterMany thanks for your comment.
Robin Williams was one of the rarest people who could truly understand Will mainly because he was also traumatized. A wrong sense of guilt rooted in his childhood was preventing him from following his passions in life. He definitely had a high level of IQ, but his EQ was not high enough to manage his life crises.December 1, 2023 at 5:50 pm in reply to: Good Will Hunting Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122622Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThanks for your comment, Soroosh. In the upcoming class, we will discuss why you don’t like this film in spite of its great popularity.
November 25, 2023 at 12:13 am in reply to: Little Miss Sunshine Movie Review in Film Criticism #122495Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterYou’ve genuinely referred to one of the most important messages of this movie, which is trying your best to win without being obsessed with the final result.
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1. made me shock = shocked me / made me shockedNovember 25, 2023 at 12:09 am in reply to: Little Miss Sunshine Movie Review in Film Criticism #122494Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThanks a lot for your thorough comment.
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1. it help me = it helped me
2. you just have to don’t give up = you just have to not give up
3. every single one of them were = every single one of them was
4. Olive, which was = Olive, who / that was …
5. such a good supporters = such good supportersNovember 25, 2023 at 12:03 am in reply to: Little Miss Sunshine Movie Review in Film Criticism #122493Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThank you for your comment, Soroosh. Yet, I need to say that, in my opinion, we were not watching a very happy family in this tragicomedy.
November 16, 2023 at 9:16 pm in reply to: As Good As It Gets Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122340Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterWell-written! I totally agree. He was changing a lot as he had enough motivation to go through the series of changes. He started from a misanthrope and got closer to a philanthrope by the end of the film.
November 16, 2023 at 9:11 pm in reply to: As Good As It Gets Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122339Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
KeymasterThat was quite unexpected to see the main character making a connection with the dog.
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1. The old man was playing the piano (past continuous tense)
2. it was really coolNovember 10, 2023 at 1:50 pm in reply to: Hachi Dog’s Tale Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122191Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl
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1. … never left the other one alone
2. professor = the professor -
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