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December 30, 2023 at 12:12 am in reply to: Ex Machina Movie Analysis in Film Criticism Course #123271
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you, Armaghan, for leaving such a long comment and criticism on Ex Machina!
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1. AL = AI (artificial intelligence)
2. thinking how can it be possible = thinking how it can be possible
3. an AL have feelings = an AI has feelings
4. it tured out = it turned outDecember 30, 2023 at 12:03 am in reply to: Ex Machina Movie Analysis in Film Criticism Course #123270
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you, Dr. Hooshmand, for criticizing the film, Ex Machina.
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1. made me to think = made me think
2. You should know the difference between “think of” and “think about”. For this context, the latter is more accurate.
3. a matter of much debateDecember 29, 2023 at 11:58 pm in reply to: Ex Machina Movie Analysis in Film Criticism Course #123269
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterSuch a long and complete comment! Thank you, Soroosh.
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1. bed thing = bad thing, which must be a typo.December 29, 2023 at 11:54 pm in reply to: Ex Machina Movie Analysis in Film Criticism Course #123268
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you, Parnian. Such a concise and inclusive comment!
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1. it didn’t bored me = it didn’t bore me
2. I didn’t mind about what = I didn’t mind what …
3. Ava is actually = Ava was actuallyDecember 23, 2023 at 1:21 am in reply to: The Tenant Movie Review & Analysis for Film Criticism #123082
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you for your comment on the psychological thriller, The Tenant.
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1. … masterpiece deserved to be watch = … masterpiece that deserves to be watched
2. holocost = holocaust
3. who considered as foreigner = who was considered to be a foreigner
4. Frence = FranceDecember 17, 2023 at 12:47 am in reply to: نظر من درباره تدریس زبان فارسی در مدرسه فارسی آنلاین #122962
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterخیلی خوشحال هستم که این خبر خوب را می شنوم. شما در مدت کمتر از دو ماه توانستید پیشرفت خیلی خوبی در خواندن و نوشتن زبان فارسی به دست بیاورید. به نظر من، پیشرفت شما در این مدت کوتاه دو دلیل مهم دارد.
اول اینکه، شما پشتکار خیلی خوبی در یادگیری زبان فارسی دارید و به عنوان یک فارسی آموز بزرگسال، انگیزه زیادی برای فراگیری زبان فارسی دارید. به همین دلیل، در این مدت کوتاه، از راه کامنت گذاشتن در پایین درسها، خواندن و نوشتن فارسی را تمرین کردید. در این مدت کوتاه، از طرف شما، حدود 100 کامنت در مدرسه فارسی آنلاین ما گذاشته شده است و ما به همه آنها پاسخ داده ایم.
دلیل دوم هم این است که شما از راه آموزش غیر همزمان زبان فارسی در کنار کلاس آنلاین فارسی، به یادگیری زبان فارسی خود، عمق زیادی داده اید به گونه ای که آموزش زبان فارسی هرگز محدود به کلاس زبان فارسی نشده است. از آنجایی که همه درسهای فارسی ما دارای ویدیو هستند، شما قبل و بعد از هر کلاس نیز می توانید به آموزش زبان فارسی بپردازید.
با آرزوی موفقیت بیشتر برای شما.
December 15, 2023 at 8:52 pm in reply to: Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron Analysis and Review #122940
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterYes, you are right. Certainly, freedom is one of the most significant aspects of this animated movie. Thanks so much for your comment.
December 15, 2023 at 8:50 pm in reply to: Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron Analysis and Review #122939
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you for raising crucial points about the characters and plot of this animated movie in your flawless comment.
December 15, 2023 at 8:48 pm in reply to: Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron Analysis and Review #122938
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterExcellent and perfect criticism. Thank you so much.
December 7, 2023 at 6:41 pm in reply to: Soul Movie Review and Analysis in Film Criticism Forum #122755
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you for your comment, Soroosh.
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1. What do you mean by “spectfull”?
2. I would like to watch it (to vs. too)
3. one of the best ones I’ve ever seen / watchedDecember 7, 2023 at 1:46 pm in reply to: Soul Movie Review and Analysis in Film Criticism Forum #122751
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterSuch a philosophical comment!
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1. tell us that you shouldn’t = tell us that we shouldn’t
2. and learn how to = and learning how to … (in parallel to the other gerunds)
3. life is also in watching the leaves = this sentences appears to be ambiguous and strange perhaps due to being translated literally from Persian.December 5, 2023 at 12:45 am in reply to: Soul Movie Review and Analysis in Film Criticism Forum #122710
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThank you for your comment.
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an very inspiring animation = a very inspiring animation
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I agree with you on the inspiring message of Soul. Nevertheless, I couldn’t approve of the form through which the message was conveyed. I personally found it too whimsical. This weird type of form negatively impacted on the great message.December 1, 2023 at 5:59 pm in reply to: Good Will Hunting Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122623
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterMany thanks for your comment.
Robin Williams was one of the rarest people who could truly understand Will mainly because he was also traumatized. A wrong sense of guilt rooted in his childhood was preventing him from following his passions in life. He definitely had a high level of IQ, but his EQ was not high enough to manage his life crises.December 1, 2023 at 5:50 pm in reply to: Good Will Hunting Movie Review in Film Criticism Course #122622
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThanks for your comment, Soroosh. In the upcoming class, we will discuss why you don’t like this film in spite of its great popularity.
November 25, 2023 at 12:13 am in reply to: Little Miss Sunshine Movie Review in Film Criticism #122495
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterYou’ve genuinely referred to one of the most important messages of this movie, which is trying your best to win without being obsessed with the final result.
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1. made me shock = shocked me / made me shocked -
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