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It’s terrific that you know yourself pretty well. You’re content with your overall appearance and intelligence. If you’re somehow concerned with being rather fat, I think you can modify your lifestyle to lose some weight because as you know: the sooner, the better.
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* I am a kind person.Feedback
* A difficult challenging question! (exclamation mark)
* in such a breathtaking situation
* I wish I had the opportunity to prevent …
* may be = maybe
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That’s right. It’s quite a challenging question, and there’s a widening gap between logic and emotion. We will discuss that in more detail in the class.The consequences are already terribly dire. Your reckless acquaintance (hypothetically) has badly injured an innocent pedestrian. We get it from this part of the question: “run over someone while being inattentive”. Then you appear in the court of law as a witness and you take the oath to tell the truth.
For the journey of this week, please get ready for these tasks:
Reading and listening:
Essay writing:
I’ll assess 2 essays here:
For the second essay, a new post will be created and published. To see the latest essays chronologically ordered, click on the link below:
https://lelb.net/category/ielts-essay-writing-practice/
Round table: Please prepare yourselves for discussing the following topics in the class.For Dr. Hooshmand
For Soroosh
For Armaghan
English story:
So elaborate and expressively detailed! Did you know you could actually trick your brain into dreaming of something in particular at night? With repetition, excitement and attention, you can probably choose your night dreams, although it requires some skill. Furthermore, sometimes you do have some special dreams, yet you don’t remember them when you wake up.
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* which I am one of (them) should be omitted. For example: This is the book I was talking about (it). “it” is omitted.
* southeastern
* of a holy person
* and last but not leastI could guess that you must be Sorrosh. Please post your comments with your own account, if possible.
In English, we say, “when there’s a will, then there’s a way.”
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* i –> I (personal pronoun)
* YouTuber
* I’d like to be a YouTuber in / within 5 years.Feedback
* why should I stop …?
* I also believe I should not fill my brain …
* that has nothing to do with meWe will discuss this point in the class.
Hello. During this week, please prepare yourself for these assignments:
Reading and listening comprehension
Writing practice
Round table
For Soroosh
For Dr. HooshmandFor Armaghan
English story
This is a sign of optimism when you oft for looking forward and not backward, or focusing on your future rather than past. Congrats!
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* The first word of your sentence should be capitalized.
* …, I would try not to make the same mistakes
* … sometimes I tell myself that (use simple present tense)
* making mistakes (plural)
* if we take lessons from them
* these mistakesFeedback
* You should know the difference between university course and university major.
* I decided to choose
* stressful dilemmas (no situation)During this week, please prepare yourself for the followings:
Essay writing (the same essay)
Reading and listening
English storyRound table
Soroosh’s topicArmaghan’s topic
Dr. Hooshmand’s topic
Note. I had to edit one part of your comment.
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* what would happen in
* the situation would get better
* if it would become popularNote. I had to edit your comment.
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* help me prevent making mistakes
* … and asking my friends to help me choose … (parallelism in grammar)