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* I’m
* … in a conversation, for I’m a reserved person.
* emotions.
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So you must be an introverted person, but remember that a conversation in which a person just listens is NOT a real conversation because any conversation must be two-sided.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterNoted. Thank you.
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* I would usually try (to talk about an action that was occurring in the past)
* are more important than
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I have the same opinion about the topic. It proves that, as mentioned by you, time brings more maturity.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterآفرین پوریا جان. بسیار عالی و کامل نوشتی. واقعا لذت بردم. از واژگان خیلی خوبی استفاده کردی و با جزئیات درباره شب چله یا شب یلدا توضیح دادی.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterGreat to see that you have an admirable sense of integrity!
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* … that I don’t mean (omit ‘it’)
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterIt’s terrific that you know yourself pretty well. You’re content with your overall appearance and intelligence. If you’re somehow concerned with being rather fat, I think you can modify your lifestyle to lose some weight because as you know: the sooner, the better.
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* I am a kind person.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterFeedback
* A difficult challenging question! (exclamation mark)
* in such a breathtaking situation
* I wish I had the opportunity to prevent …
* may be = maybe
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That’s right. It’s quite a challenging question, and there’s a widening gap between logic and emotion. We will discuss that in more detail in the class.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThe consequences are already terribly dire. Your reckless acquaintance (hypothetically) has badly injured an innocent pedestrian. We get it from this part of the question: “run over someone while being inattentive”. Then you appear in the court of law as a witness and you take the oath to tell the truth.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterآفرین کیان جان. کاملا درست نوشتی!
فقط بهتره که بین واژگان فاصله بدی.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterFor the journey of this week, please get ready for these tasks:
Reading and listening:English Documentary on Exoplanets with Transcript & Flashcards
Essay writing:
I’ll assess 2 essays here:
For the second essay, a new post will be created and published. To see the latest essays chronologically ordered, click on the link below:
https://lelb.net/category/ielts-essay-writing-practice/
Round table: Please prepare yourselves for discussing the following topics in the class.For Dr. Hooshmand
For Soroosh
For Armaghan
English story:
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterSo elaborate and expressively detailed! Did you know you could actually trick your brain into dreaming of something in particular at night? With repetition, excitement and attention, you can probably choose your night dreams, although it requires some skill. Furthermore, sometimes you do have some special dreams, yet you don’t remember them when you wake up.
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* which I am one of (them) should be omitted. For example: This is the book I was talking about (it). “it” is omitted.
* southeastern
* of a holy person
* and last but not least
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterI could guess that you must be Sorrosh. Please post your comments with your own account, if possible.
In English, we say, “when there’s a will, then there’s a way.”
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* i –> I (personal pronoun)
* YouTuber
* I’d like to be a YouTuber in / within 5 years.
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* why should I stop …?
* I also believe I should not fill my brain …
* that has nothing to do with meWe will discuss this point in the class.
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterHello. During this week, please prepare yourself for these assignments:
Reading and listening comprehension
Writing practice
Round table
For Soroosh
For Dr. HooshmandFor Armaghan
English story
Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri AslKeymasterThis is a sign of optimism when you oft for looking forward and not backward, or focusing on your future rather than past. Congrats!
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* The first word of your sentence should be capitalized.
* …, I would try not to make the same mistakes
* … sometimes I tell myself that (use simple present tense)
* making mistakes (plural)
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