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* This kind of movies … = This kind of movies always makes me question
* make someone do something = make me question
* , which I don’t consider
* It helps me to not take everything too seriouslyFeedback
* I’ve ever seen
* I thinked = I thought
* this film well be = this film will be
* he’s whole life = his whole life
* everybody was happy for hem = … for himبا عرض سلام و ادب خدمت شما سرکار خانم سارا حسینپور گرامی.
بابت پیام پرمهر تون بسیار سپاسگزارم. ما هم خیلی خوشحالیم که شما به عنوان نویسنده و مدرس زبان فارسی به مدرسه دوزبانه فارسی و انگلیسی ما پیوستید.
با نگاهی به رزومه و پروفایل شما با نام Sara Hosseinpour متوجه شدم که ظرف مدت زمان کوتاهی، فعالیت های آموزشی درخشانی داشتید. از این بابت، بسیار خرسند هستم.
به امید دیدن موفقیت های بیشتر از شما بزرگوار.
Thank you, Soroosh, for your comment!
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* maded = made
* chaos life = chaotic life
* psychosis illness = psychotic illnessA Beautiful Mind is a great film presenting a mind that was not much so beautiful, as John Nash was schizophrenic, paranoid, and delusional. Nevertheless, he did all he could to organize his thoughts and engineer a beautiful mind out of a messy one. His painstaking efforts and perseverance beautified his mind and mentality.
In my modest opinion, what John Nash did to harness his mentality was by far more splendid and admirable than the conquest of Mt. Everest by a paralyzed person. That’s why I believe this victory was his crowning achievement and was even more significant than his Nobel Prize.
Well-written with a literary style!
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* genius people = people of genius / geniuses
* everything comes at a price
* clew = clue
* (better to write): I had no clue on what was really going onThe Road Not Taken by Robert Frost refers to dilemmas in life and the challenge of decision making, which sometimes tends to be extremely mind-twisting. However, our decisions, sound or rash, mature or immature, give us our identity. It’s natural that, from time to time, we might cast doubt on our former decisions, yet we cannot question the person who has made all those decisions.
Well-written enriched with great vocabulary! Thank you, Dr. Hooshmand.
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It’s better to rewrite your comment in this way: … many others have told us not to be stuck in …Thank you for bringing up this relevant idiomatic expression, this too shall pass.
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… and the following event takes its place / … and is replaced by the following eventI love this English quote, too, Soroosh. This quote by Roberts Frost can help us relieve so much anxiety and tension.
Such a perfect comment, with advanced vocabulary! Thank you so much. This is a great chance for you to use recently learned vocabulary in your writings.
* brilliantly
* Alfred Hitchcock who is believed as …
* horror exhibited in its scenes
* haunt as an intransitive verb requires an object.This meaningful quote by Robert Frost on life and time is incredibly cathartic by nature because it reminds us that we should not get stuck in or overshadowed by some special somber chapters of life. As a result, if implemented and practiced sufficiently, this quote can reduce tension and anxiety to a noticeable extent, particularly while dealing with critical situations.
Psycho is one of the most mysterious and thrilling movies I’ve ever watched. The film which is based on a novel is psychologically grounded on some issues, such as dissociative identity disorder, Oedipus Complex in Freudian Psychology, and others.
The first time I watched Psycho, I thought Marion was the main character or protagonist. Then to my astonishment, she was murdered by the motel owner. Afterwards, I thought the private investigator could solve the puzzle. Then again, I was taken by surprise when he, too, got killed by Norman Bates, the motel owner.
What’s more, I had no idea Marion’s sister would be the one who could unravel the mystery, which indeed was the climax of the story and concealed to me till the last moment.
To truly understand the sophisticated plot of the story, you need to watch it at least three times as recommended by renowned films critics. Yet, when well-understood, you could realize how dangerous and life-threatening a psychopath can be to other people.