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I like the way you express your voice and reasons. It’s fairly comprehensive. Kudos to you! Also I should admire the way you pay attention to the form of what you plan to write about. The form also exerts some influence.
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* specialized doctor / specialist
* a bigger hospital (not hospitals)
* some where = somewhere
* Country side = The countrysideThat is also true. These days, people do respect their privacy, and they don’t like to be visited or questioned frequently, even by their close relatives.
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1. advantages of living
2. slower pace (not peace)
3. more plesenter => did you mean more pleasure??
4. eachother = each other
5. house = houses (the last word should be plural)آفرین آلتا. خیلی خوب و دقیق نوشتی و نظرت رو روشن و کامل گفتی.
در دیدگاهت، این واژگان رو اشتباه نوشتی:
خالب = جالب
دفن مو کردند = دفن می کردند
متوجهه می سویم = متوجه می شویم
اترام به مردگن = احترام به مردگان
Going on a trip to rural areas seems to be an interesting and reasonable solution to this situation. However, I should add that these days, you can enjoy modernity and live in the country at the same time, thanks to advancement in technology, particularly the internet.
Your opponents or debaters should respond to this viewpoint raised by you.
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* in the countryside
* can not = cannot
* in the 21 centuryJack went to bed that night and dreamed about attending his mother’s funeral ceremony. This nightmare gave him almost a heart attack. When he woke up, he was so happy to see his mother alive and he said to himself that his mother was the most important thing to him in the world.
The following day, his engineering talent helped him to strive to find a solution to his critical situation. He called the university he was admitted to with a trembling voice. He discussed his issue with the scholarship and admission committee.
He told them that he couldn’t leave his sick mother alone and start his education. All of a sudden, in the middle of the telephone conversation, he burst into tears inadvertently and asked for their guidance.
The person in charge told Jack that he would inform him about the decision of the committee in one or two days. Finally, the committee contacted Jack on the telephone and notified him that Jack could bring his mother to the dormitory as well. They said that because Jack was the most prominent candidate for that educational position, the committee could make an exception to accommodate his mother as well.When Jack told his mother about this good promising news, he could vividly see the glow of joy and admiration in her eyes. The following day, both Jack and his mother, who was feeling much better now, were busy packing and getting ready for their long happy journey.
Thank you so much for this detailed article on the pillars of happiness in life. I absolutely enjoyed that and gained some valuable insights.
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1. genetic reasons = genetic blueprint / control / markers, etc.
2. repeated repetitions = this is redundant, you could say: endless repetitions
3- grow and gives meaning = grow and give meaningChoosing rural areas to live in for their tranquility and idyllic outlooks seems to be reasonable. Yet, what can you do with lack of necessary facilities in the country?
You just designated your choice without any evidence in support of that. In this activity, first you need to provide your reasons to support your claim in the forum. Then in the class, you will argue with your classmates and the teacher ON THE BASIS OF your stated reasons here.
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1. especially
2. my friends
3. cheat on sb = to be unfaithful to your husband, wife or partner from a sexual point of view. I suppose you meant betrayed me or let me down. You can clarify that below.
4. think more = think twice before …Feedback
1. Most of the time
2. easily
3. trust someone (do not use ‘to’)
4. ordinary / casual friends (not usual friends)
5. can not = cannotآفرین آلتا جان! واقعا عالی نوشتی، با اینکه تمرین سختی بود.
فقط به جای پنجصد باید بنویسی: پانصد
همچنین، هفتصد رو به اشتباه 600 به عدد تبدیل کردی در آخرین تمرین
حتما می دونی که 300 هم به این شکل نوشته میشه: سیصد.
بله کیان جان. کاملا درست می گی. امروزه، خیلی از کارها با اینترنت انجام می شه، مثل تشکیل کلاس آنلاین فارسی. برای درس خواندن و بازی کردن هم از اینترنت استفاده می کنیم، هم به شکل فردی و هم به شکل گروهی.
اینترنت در دنیای امروز، فاصله ها را برداشته و مردم از هر کجای دنیا، به راحتی می توانند با هم حرف بزنند و ارتباط برقرار کنند.
Welcome aboard!
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1. We know that exercise can affect your muscles => we know that exercise can affect OUR muscles (do not shift the pronouns suddenly.)
2. running, jogging, swimming, etc. / and the like / and so forth.
3. angry, happy, sad, in love, stronger, kinder, etc. / and so forth.
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For the first time as a commenter at LELB Society, I should admire your writing style, great knowledge and range of advanced vocabulary! I enjoyed your essay or article so much.