[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Your reply was so meaningful and inspiring, and I enjoyed it a lot. I also hold onto this belief that unconditional forgiveness, if practiced excessively, could turn out to be counterproductive. This is because of the fact that the person who has betrayed us in one way or another might be encouraged to do so in the future on other people.
Feedback
believe to ==> believe in

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

For the next session, please study the following:
Reading material:

Ancient Rome Facts – English Documentary

English short story:

The Wolf and The Lion Aesop’s Fable + Video

Complete this story one by one in an interactive way. Please do not complete it suddenly. Let’s go on paragraph by paragraph. It could be completed in 2 or more weeks, and not just in one week. There is no rush. It’s an open-ended story started by me. I will also participate in this activity. You need to use your own creativity and logic to add more and more paragraphs.

Dealing with a Dilemma – Open-ended Story

Check the forum of English questions for more new topics:

English Conversation Questions for Adults

Ask me if you have any question or criticism about your assignments for this week as a REPLY here in your own portfolio.

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

@farhanghooshmand
In your reading, you have made the following mistakes or mispronunciations. You should try not to make the same mistakes in your future recitations.

Source of reading

Physical Exercise Benefits – Reading Practice

1. exercise
2. alert
3. wrist
4. usually
5. idea
6. injure
7. prevent

@soroosha

Source of reading

The Lion The Wolf and the Fox – Aesop’s Fable

1. heard
2. himself
3. benefited
4. immediately

NOTE. Next time, before reading any other text, please refer to your portfolio assessment page and review your previous mispronunciations. You should make an attempt to avoid making these mistakes. This is the only way you can improve and perfect your pronunciation, and this technique can help you raise the level of your awareness of your mispronunciations.

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Having tested the speed of my website pages, I noticed that the WP YouTube Lyte plugin sometimes does not work as expected. I searched for a substitute for that and came up with LazyLoad Plugin for Images, Videos and Iframes by WP-Rocket.

I double-checked its functionality and yielded best possible results for website optimization. For this reason, I should admit that website management is in fact in a state of flux all the time and you need to update your knowledge and expertise constantly.

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

خواهش می کنم.

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

سلام. امیدوارم حالتون خوب باشه.

برای کلاس فارسی بعدی، این درس درباره صفات فارسی رو بخونید. این درس، ویدیو هم داره. پس لطفا ویدیوی درس رو هم ببینید تا با تلفظ درست واژگان آشنا بشید.

اگر هم سوالی داشتید، می تونید از من بپرسید. در کلاس فارسی می بینمتون.

صفات فارسی درباره ظاهر و شخصیت مردم – 20 صفت مهم

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Hello and welcome aboard!
I think you need to learn more about English conjunctions in more detail. For this reason, please study this page on English conjunctions, and pay attention to their functions and examples:

English Conjunctions

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

خیلی خوبه دایانا جان که داری فارسی نوشتن رو تمرین می کنی. چه سوال خوبی پرسیدی! آفرین بر تو! توی کلاس فارسی درباره سوالت، صحبت می کنیم.

باید به این شکل بنویسی:

شما ترجیح می دهید که توی هوای خیلی خیلی سرد باشین یا تو هوای خیلی خیلی گرم باشین؟

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Hello and welcome to the beginning of your portfolio assessment journey.
For the next session, please study this short story and watch the embedded video or podcast of the story at the bottom of the lesson:

The Lion The Wolf and the Fox – Aesop’s Fable

Furthermore, please study this reading material on the benefits of doing physical exercise:

Physical Exercise Benefits – Reading Practice

Please write an IELTS essay on the topic of obesity on this page:

IELTS Essay on Obesity with Full Essay Model

And last but not least, get involved in our round table activity found here:

English Conversation Questions for Adults

All the best of luck and joy in the upcoming week!

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

I was amazed by your wisdom! I’m sorry about your unpleasant experience with your friend. Sometimes, I believe it’s almost impossible to get to know your friends thoroughly. However, we can use this famous proverb in English that reads “desperate times call for desperate measures”.
About the second question, I totally agree with you on this point that forgiveness brings more peace of mind and tranquility.
Considering the last question, I should say that when you fire one of your employees, it implies that you’ve not forgiven them. Conversely, this is a very severe type of punishment which of course must serve them right.
—
Feedback:

1. After ‘consider’, do not use ‘as’. As comes after ‘regard’.
2. forgived –> forgave

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Thank you for mentioning the spent time.
* essay

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

As you mentioned stress and insomnia and having nightmares are closely intertwined. To avoid nightmares, some people superficially take sleeping pills, which I believe, could exacerbate the situation.
Practicing meditation before going to bed is a reliable technique to calm you down and deepen your sleep.

However, I think you can never turn off your thoughts completely. You can filter out negativity, though.

Feedback

1. after ‘would’ and other modal auxiliaries, always use bare infinities.
2. Insomnia is uncountable.
3. after a few times
4. I suffered
5. nowadays
6. turn off my thoughts

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Analysis and scoring

Cohesion and coherence: 15 of 25%

• You need to use more conjunctions in your essay. Study this post on English conjunctions.
• The format or structure of your essay requires refinement, especially the length of paragraphs.

Grammatical range and accuracy: 15 of 25%

1. It’s –> it is a fact
2. it happened to us
3. different from
4. there is some correlation
5. Don’t use “although & but” together.
6. adult life = adulthood
7. needs –> need
8. good grades
9. as students
10. they reach a point
11. insight into

Lexical resources: 20 of 25%

• You’re using more academic and formal vocabulary. Congratulations!

Task achievement: 18 of 25%

• Your 1st paragraph is not a standard introductory paragraph. It lacks a clear topic sentence.
• Your second paragraph makes a better choice for introductory paragraph.
• Your third paragraph is supporting your stance very well.

Spelling: Good

Punctuation: Needs improvement

Word count: “298” Excellent

Time on Essay Writing: XX of 40 minutes

• Not mentioned!!

Band score: 6.5 of 9

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

Hi Maryam,
Thank you for reaching out to us for this question.
The complete guide to our comprehensive services, including the categories of lessons, is accessible here:

Take a Tour at LELB Society to Study Better

If you go to the Taxonomies section, you’ll be able to locate all lessons in categories as shown below:

Categories of English & Persian Lessons at LELB Society

And to be more precise, here is where you can find all IELTS essays submitted to us by our students:
https://lelb.net/category/ielts-essay-writing-practice/
Please feel free to ask us any further question you might have.

[Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl]

سلام بر شما. خیلی خوشحالیم که در مدرسه ما دارید خوب فارسی یاد می گیرید. همچنین خیلی خوبه که فارسی آموزی شما فقط محدود به کلاس های فارسی ما نمیشه و با مطالعه درسها و ویدیوهای ما، خودتون هم خودتون هم به شکل مستقل در سایت ما فارسی یاد می گیرید. اگر هم سوالی داشته باشید، ما خیلی زود به شکل کامنت صوتی و متنی به همه سوال های شما پاسخ می دیم.

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