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Well-written and so meaningful!
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* encourages
* It FIlls = It fills
* a better and more promising futureFeedback
* remind someone of / about something
* if Joker had taken his medicine, he might not have ended up like thatسلام و عرض ادب خدمت سرکار خانم سپیده قربانلو گرامی،
بدین وسیله، از تلاشهای ارزنده شما به عنوان مدرس زبان فارسی و تولیدکننده محتوای آموزشی تقدیر و تشکر به عمل می آوریم.
مدرسه دوزبانه فارسی و انگلیسی ما از قلم و توجه شما بزرگواران انرژی مثبت می گیرد و در راستای رسیدن به اهداف آموزشی والاتر، قدم برمی دارد.
شایان توجه است که تمامی کارهای شما تا کنون در موتورهای جستجو، از جمله گوگل، ایندکس شده و به عنوان رزومه کاری شما قابل استناد می باشد.
مشتاقانه در انتظار دیدن کارهای بعدی شما هستیم.
The film, Joker, is in essence a tragedy acted by a comedian. One of the central themes of the film is that laughter and happiness are not necessarily interchangeable. That is to say, it’s wrong to conclude that those who laugh a lot and loudly are undoubtedly happy people.
Arthur was an innocent victim of the unabated cruelty and inequity of his society. He was suppressing all the oppression imposed on him for an extended period of time until he got a chance to take revenge. This action, which is not supported anyhow, made him feel that he was no longer a victim.
It is clear that Arthur was not a vicious or wicked person as he did not do any harm to the dwarf or midget in the film, and in fact, tried to protect him. Psychologically speaking, people who are traumatized or victimized at an early age like Arthur could probably resort to violence or crime when they grow up.
Fantastic criticism! Thank you so much, Soroosh.
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* I saw this movie like a year ago / last year
* becamed = became
* at the first = at first
* he was depressed / he was suffering from depression
* people was = people wereسلام بر شما، سرکار خانم سپیده قربانلوی گرامی،
بسیار سپاسگزاریم که نسخه خطی مقاله خود درباره جوجه کباب زعفرانی را برای چاپ در آکادمی دوزبانه ما به ما ارسال کرده اید. پس از بررسی و ویرایش نهایی، مقاله شما به آدرس زیر، چاپ شده است:
Thank you, dear Maryam, for sharing your educational experience with us regarding asynchronous learning in our bilingual academy. It’s so promising to see you’re improving your English and Persian competency thoroughly through asynchronous learning at LELB Society.
In fact, the majority of our students do not need to join our online classes on Farsi or English because our English and Persian resources together with our full support are sufficient for them.
Dear Mr. Salahuddin Kaoser,
Thank you so much for submitting your manuscript to us for publication. Your manuscript was edited and published with the following title:
Ozymandias by Percy Bysshe Shelley reminds us that power and position are not permanent. Even the greatest kings and rulers have perished, and nothing but insignificant remnants has remained from them and their kingdom. This meaningful poem teaches us that arrogance is a dangerous and self-destructive state of mind.
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* This kind of movies … = This kind of movies always makes me question
* make someone do something = make me question
* , which I don’t consider
* It helps me to not take everything too seriouslyFeedback
* I’ve ever seen
* I thinked = I thought
* this film well be = this film will be
* he’s whole life = his whole life
* everybody was happy for hem = … for himبا عرض سلام و ادب خدمت شما سرکار خانم سارا حسینپور گرامی.
بابت پیام پرمهر تون بسیار سپاسگزارم. ما هم خیلی خوشحالیم که شما به عنوان نویسنده و مدرس زبان فارسی به مدرسه دوزبانه فارسی و انگلیسی ما پیوستید.
با نگاهی به رزومه و پروفایل شما با نام Sara Hosseinpour متوجه شدم که ظرف مدت زمان کوتاهی، فعالیت های آموزشی درخشانی داشتید. از این بابت، بسیار خرسند هستم.
به امید دیدن موفقیت های بیشتر از شما بزرگوار.