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In response to the 3rd question, I should say that I also like to socialize with nonchalant people. Yet, sometimes I ask my friends to criticize me, of course, I only make this request from my sincere and close friends who know me very well. I believe sometimes I cannot see some of my weaknesses myself. However, I don’t like to gather around those who voluntarily impose their unsolicited criticism.
4. As a hyper-sensitive person who is also highly introverted, the circle of my friends is really small. Nevertheless, by taking a casual look at my friends, it would be easily noticeable that I must be a pensive, taciturn and creative person.Feedback
* withoutYour reply was so meaningful and inspiring, and I enjoyed it a lot. I also hold onto this belief that unconditional forgiveness, if practiced excessively, could turn out to be counterproductive. This is because of the fact that the person who has betrayed us in one way or another might be encouraged to do so in the future on other people.
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believe to ==> believe inFor the next session, please study the following:
Reading material:
English short story:
Complete this story one by one in an interactive way. Please do not complete it suddenly. Let’s go on paragraph by paragraph. It could be completed in 2 or more weeks, and not just in one week. There is no rush. It’s an open-ended story started by me. I will also participate in this activity. You need to use your own creativity and logic to add more and more paragraphs.
Check the forum of English questions for more new topics:
Ask me if you have any question or criticism about your assignments for this week as a REPLY here in your own portfolio.@farhanghooshmand
In your reading, you have made the following mistakes or mispronunciations. You should try not to make the same mistakes in your future recitations.Source of reading
- exercise
- alert
- wrist
- usually
- idea
- injure
- prevent
Source of reading
- heard
- himself
- benefited
- immediately
NOTE. Next time, before reading any other text, please refer to your portfolio assessment page and review your previous mispronunciations. You should make an attempt to avoid making these mistakes. This is the only way you can improve and perfect your pronunciation, and this technique can help you raise the level of your awareness of your mispronunciations.
Having tested the speed of my website pages, I noticed that the WP YouTube Lyte plugin sometimes does not work as expected. I searched for a substitute for that and came up with LazyLoad Plugin for Images, Videos and Iframes by WP-Rocket.
I double-checked its functionality and yielded best possible results for website optimization. For this reason, I should admit that website management is in fact in a state of flux all the time and you need to update your knowledge and expertise constantly.
سلام. امیدوارم حالتون خوب باشه.
برای کلاس فارسی بعدی، این درس درباره صفات فارسی رو بخونید. این درس، ویدیو هم داره. پس لطفا ویدیوی درس رو هم ببینید تا با تلفظ درست واژگان آشنا بشید.
اگر هم سوالی داشتید، می تونید از من بپرسید. در کلاس فارسی می بینمتون.
Hello and welcome aboard!
I think you need to learn more about English conjunctions in more detail. For this reason, please study this page on English conjunctions, and pay attention to their functions and examples:خیلی خوبه دایانا جان که داری فارسی نوشتن رو تمرین می کنی. چه سوال خوبی پرسیدی! آفرین بر تو! توی کلاس فارسی درباره سوالت، صحبت می کنیم.
باید به این شکل بنویسی:
شما ترجیح می دهید که توی هوای خیلی خیلی سرد باشین یا تو هوای خیلی خیلی گرم باشین؟
Hello and welcome to the beginning of your portfolio assessment journey.
For the next session, please study this short story and watch the embedded video or podcast of the story at the bottom of the lesson:Furthermore, please study this reading material on the benefits of doing physical exercise:
Please write an IELTS essay on the topic of obesity on this page:
And last but not least, get involved in our round table activity found here:
All the best of luck and joy in the upcoming week!I was amazed by your wisdom! I’m sorry about your unpleasant experience with your friend. Sometimes, I believe it’s almost impossible to get to know your friends thoroughly. However, we can use this famous proverb in English that reads “desperate times call for desperate measures”.
About the second question, I totally agree with you on this point that forgiveness brings more peace of mind and tranquility.
Considering the last question, I should say that when you fire one of your employees, it implies that you’ve not forgiven them. Conversely, this is a very severe type of punishment which of course must serve them right.
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Feedback:- After ‘consider’, do not use ‘as’. As comes after ‘regard’.
- forgived –> forgave
As you mentioned stress and insomnia and having nightmares are closely intertwined. To avoid nightmares, some people superficially take sleeping pills, which I believe, could exacerbate the situation.
Practicing meditation before going to bed is a reliable technique to calm you down and deepen your sleep.However, I think you can never turn off your thoughts completely. You can filter out negativity, though.
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- after ‘would’ and other modal auxiliaries, always use bare infinities.
- Insomnia is uncountable.
- after a few times
- I suffered
- nowadays
- turn off my thoughts
Analysis and scoring
Cohesion and coherence: 15 of 25%
- You need to use more conjunctions in your essay. Study this post on English conjunctions.
- The format or structure of your essay requires refinement, especially the length of paragraphs.
Grammatical range and accuracy: 15 of 25%
- It’s –> it is a fact
- it happened to us
- different from
- there is some correlation
- Don’t use “although & but” together.
- adult life = adulthood
- needs –> need
- good grades
- as students
- they reach a point
- insight into
Lexical resources: 20 of 25%
- You’re using more academic and formal vocabulary. Congratulations!
Task achievement: 18 of 25%
- Your 1st paragraph is not a standard introductory paragraph. It lacks a clear topic sentence.
- Your second paragraph makes a better choice for introductory paragraph.
- Your third paragraph is supporting your stance very well.
Spelling: Good
Punctuation: Needs improvement
Word count: “298” Excellent
Time on Essay Writing: XX of 40 minutes
- Not mentioned!!
Band score: 6.5 of 9
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