Dr. Mohammad Hossein Hariri Asl

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  • in reply to: Dealing with a Dilemma – Open-ended Story #104984

    Thank you for participating in this collaborative activity. I will also take part in it with pleasure.

    My feedback

    • her mother’s face
    • she said, “…”
    • it is also my ultimate objective as well
    • you’re sick and need to rest in bed
    in reply to: Dealing with a Dilemma – Open-ended Story #104982

    WOW! That is amazing, Armaghan! You really have a special and creative talent for literature. I’ve no doubt that you’re already into this activity. Your literary style is extraordinary! You write like professional novelists!
    My feedback:

    • visit him –> visit her
    • on weekends / at weekends
    • records store / shop
    • change my choice –> change my mind
    • attend college
    in reply to: Farhang Hooshmand Portfolio Assessment #104891

    Mispronunciations in your narrations on the following content:


    @armaghan

    1. creature
    2. 50 vs. 15
    3. hierarchy
    4. series
    5. blood pressure
    6. necessity
    7. quite vs. quiet


    @farhanghooshmand

    1. frustrated
    2. emphasize
    3. muscular
    4. giraffe
    5. allow
    6. pound
    7. insomniac
    8. specifically


    @soroosha

    1. loud
    in reply to: What Is a Life Insurance Policy? #104858

    Hi and thanks for asking this question.
    A life insurance policy is an official contract between a customer or client and an insurance company or broker according to which the client repeatedly pays for this type of insurance usually on a monthly basis. The main part of this service is that when the client dies or passes away, their beneficiaries, family members, relatives, etc., who are specified, will receive so much money.
    So, a life insurance / life assurance policy is a controversial type of insurance or a kind of investment as explained above, and the policy in this phrase refers to the official contract or agreement as a written document between the client and the company.

    in reply to: Reaching Your Goals in Life English Question #104852

    Although carpe diem is encouraged by many experts in the field of psychology, I don’t see any long-term advantage if it’s practiced excessively. Carpe diem means “seize the day” and it basically means live in the present moment. It’s a good practice for those who are stuck with the future and tend to be too alert.
    This is a sign of optimism when you try to learn from your mistakes and regard them as opportunities for self-development.
    If our main goals are not achieved, we might lose a great deal of motivation. Therefore, we should manage to accomplish our goals and objectives in life, and at the same time, strive to enjoy the process as well.
    Feedback:
    * … made me be the person … (causative verbs)
    * what I consider a satisfying life

    بله، دقیقا همین طوره. باید زیاد تلاش کنید و زیاد درس بخونید یا مطالعه کنید.

    ولی حتما می تونی یه داروساز با تجربه و یا یه پرستار مهربون بشی. از قدیم گفتند: “خواستن توانستن است.” یعنی وقتی هدفی داشته باشی و برای رسیدن به اون هدف تلاش کنی، حتما به هدفت می رسی.

    آفرین دایانا جان. بله، شغل داروسازی و پرستاری خیلی خوب و مفید هستند. هم داروساز و هم پرستار به بیمارها کمک می کنند تا زود خوب بشند و سلامتی شون رو دوباره به دست بیارند.

    شکل درست جمله شما این گونه است:

    من این شغل ها رو دوست دارم برای اینکه از آنها لذت می برم.

    داروسازی شغل خیلی خوبی هست. خیلی خوبه که از الان می دونی که می خواهی در آینده چه شغلی رو انتخاب کنی.

    بله، دقیقا همین طوره. برای خلبان شدن، باید خوب درس بخونی و تجربه زیادی به دست بیاری چون شغل خلبانی خیلی حساس و دقیق هست. هر بار که هواپیما رو به آسمان می بری، با خودت، صدها مسافر هم از جایی به جای دیگه، سفر می کنند.

    ولی همان طوری که گفتم، من مطمئنم که تو می تونی یه خلبان خیلی خیلی خوب بشی. موفق باشی کیان جان.

    خیلی کار جالبی هست. با خلبان شدن، می تونی هر روز از اون بالا و وسط ابرها، زمین رو ببینی. برای تو، آرزوی موفقیت می کنم، کیان حان!

    چه شغل پرهیجان و مفیدی! خیلی خوبه که می دونی چه شغلی رو دوست داری! من مطمئن هستم که یه خلبان خیلی خیلی خوب میشی، کیان جان!

    بازخورد:

    واژه خلبان، صدای کوتاه -َ دارد. یعنی باید به این شکل نوشته شود: خَلبان.

    in reply to: Farhang Hooshmand Portfolio Assessment #104525

    Hello.
    For the following session, please study these assigned materials:
    1. For round table, refer to the forum of English conversation questions and find the topic which doesn’t have any voice or reply yet:

    English Conversation Questions for Adults


    A hint: It’s about reaching your goals in life. I intentionally don’t give you links so that you would get more familiar with the structure of forums.
    2. Storytelling (writing practice): Please go to this topic and add more events (plot) to the story paragraph by paragraph. You already know what to do.

    Dealing with a Dilemma – Open-ended Story


    3. Reading material

    English Documentary on Giraffes with Transcript & Flashcards


    4. English story:

    The Miser – English Fairy Tale with Vocabulary Practice


    5. (optional) Feedback from your side
    You’re also welcome to express your feedback, criticism, precious ideas, suggestions, etc. in the forum of our feedback box:

    Feedback Box for LELB Society’s Students



    And last but not least, you can always use this forum to ask me questions:

    English Language Forum Ask English Questions


    Have a productive week and enjoy your life…

    in reply to: English Question on Social Life & Friendship #104522

    Yes, you’re right about the influence of modernity and a hectic lifestyle on our socialization.
    I’m impressed by the great metaphor you utilized in your comment. It could not be more beautiful and laconic than this metaphor!
    Feedback
    * scent of roses

    in reply to: Farhang Hooshmand Portfolio Assessment #104384

    Mispronunciations

    @armaghan

    From the story:

    The Wolf and The Lion Aesop’s Fable + Video

     

    • myself

    From the reading passage on ancient Rome

     

    Ancient Rome Facts – English Documentary

    1. empire
    2. emperor
    3. regal
    4. political
    5. characterize
    6. conquer
    7. Europe
    8. gladiator
    9. influence
    10. implemented


    @farhanghooshmand

    1. lead
    2. Italy
    3. empire
    4. political
    5. known
    6. primarily
    7. military
    8. territory
    9. engineering
    10. facilitate
    11. idea
    12. longevity
    13. ancestor
    14. religion
    15. architecture
    16. implement
    17. apparent
    18. originate
    19. spread
    20. outside (adv)
    21. eternal
    22. himself / myself
    23. such

     

    @soroosha

     

    such – myself – himself – immense – nearly – thoughts

    in reply to: English Question on Social Life & Friendship #104368

    In response to the 3rd question, I should say that I also like to socialize with nonchalant people. Yet, sometimes I ask my friends to criticize me, of course, I only make this request from my sincere and close friends who know me very well. I believe sometimes I cannot see some of my weaknesses myself. However, I don’t like to gather around those who voluntarily impose their unsolicited criticism.
    4. As a hyper-sensitive person who is also highly introverted, the circle of my friends is really small. Nevertheless, by taking a casual look at my friends, it would be easily noticeable that I must be a pensive, taciturn and creative person.

    Feedback
    * without

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